THIS IS SO CUTE! I LOVE IT!

This is got me laughing so hard at Tony reaction to Ziva's planning & attempt to seduce the officer. And at Ziva when she found out Tony knew the Officer!
You have great imagination and I love it.
#TivaForever :)

great story! I miss them

Awesome! Tiva always.

This was a fun and enjoyable read. Nice to see Tony in an AU light where he's the one being responsible and calling it a night. I cracked up at him saying he'd either be home in five seconds or be flattened, haha. Cuz we know Ziva has no concept of the term "speed limit" heh.

I like how you keep the realism on her idiom botching...wouldn't be Ziva without her bungling some slang phrase or other after all. Their brief argument before she gets pulled over is also very in character. And i knew as soon as Tony thought he saw a cop car that it was gonna get then pulled over lol. Because like i said, she's got no concept of speed limits. :P

Wow she's lucky th e cop was an old friend of Tony's...not sure the flirting woulda worked otherwise. His inclusion in the plot was fun and lighthearted...I hope you might use him again some day.

I loved the ending where he thinks abt how much Ziva has come to mean to him. Its really beautifully stated.

There's some SPAG issues with the dialogue...commas and such. Would be happy to PM those to ya...just hit me up :) otherwise, nice job.

Good one off story, I'm so pleased that there is still writers like yourself who still write Tiva on fanfiction, long live Tiva

I love this. Great work. Catch ya on the flip side.

This was great. You write Tiva so well. Please continue writing their story.

Another fab story was curious as to whether Ziva was still an agent?

Amazing! Great! Tiva always.

Manner, not manor. Couldn't help myself with that. Thoroughly enjoying your stories.

You should consider writing a multi-chap Tiva. You write them well :)