This is such an interesting AU! I love how you're writing all the characters, and how well you've fitted them to new roles. And I'm excited to see Al and Winry go all Hardy Boys, solving the mystery. XD

The plot is really interesting and I really enjoy how you choose to wrote the story! I hope you'll update this story, it's too good to not be finished by you.

Very good! I love it. You write the escalating tension very well.

This chapter made me cry, I love this entire story.

amazing

OMOMGOMGOMG TGYHJIUHYGTFGYHJKJNHBUDSHXAZVS CYUXZ;CDU THIS IS SO AMAZING I DON'T HAVE ANY WORDS! AHHHHHHHHH I'M SO GLAD YOU WROTE THIS!

Man this is getting good! (not that it wasn't good before)

So are the humunculi still not human here? I'm very interested to see how you tie them in! And Ed's just going to get himself into more trouble, isn't he? I feel so sorry for Ed already, I just want him to have a smooth trial and be acquitted, but that's not very conducive to the plot, now is it?

One typo I noticed: "Descent within the ranks?" should be "Dissent within the ranks?"

Don't worry about the inconsistent updates; I just began college myself, and it really is a major change in both workload and lifestyle. Myself, I only have time to read during my breaks, which is why I'm only reading the last two chapters now. Keep going at your own pace :)

This is a great story! I hope all goes well in college and that you do find time to update! :)

As a huge Ace Attorney fan, that's a really cool AU. Keep it up!

This is a very interesting premise! :) I really like the way you are using the characters.

this is so sweet. mustangs trying so hard

This story is amazingly realistic and fun to read! Keep up the good work!

Ah, I forgot about this!

I've been out of the fma fandom for a little while, and I haven't read any fanfiction in a long time.

I'm really glad I decided to follow this story, cause when I saw the little E-mail alert, I thought shoot, might as well see what this is.

I'm glad I did! This is a great story so far!

Still great! Hope for another update soon! :)

Man, I love this fanfic! Update soon?