Reviews for So Dense?
Reallyexplantion chapter 4 . 5/16/2017
Yeahhhhh! Yes thank you Blaze~chan! :3
Reallyexplantion chapter 2 . 5/16/2017
Natsu like a older minor. Like acts like a minor but is oldwer than a minor. Lol
Nikster111 chapter 1 . 5/12/2017
Great story! This was so amazing! I love your stories and I hope to read more of you later. Thank you for making this!
Secret san chapter 4 . 4/15/2017
Please write a story about natsu be a master and Lucy be his maid... Lemon please
mcwarner chapter 4 . 1/11/2017
Great Story! Sorry my keyboard is being weird.
mcwarner chapter 1 . 1/11/2017
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mcwarner chapter 1 . 1/11/2017
b. b. b Bibb. b. bb. bb. byoh b. nmnhpnnn
Twishadowhunter chapter 4 . 6/2/2016
Great job!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/5/2015
OMGG I LOVED THIS U R THE QUEEN OF NALU SMUT! I'm kind of disappointed tbh, I really wanted you to continue this smut. I LOOVEE the way you portay Natsu in bed, its so much in his character, I dont think being naturally dominant during sex is part of his character at all. I feel like he'd be more submissive in the beginning, since he's less experienced and aware than Lucy. And also, Sub!natsu is such a turn on in my opinion, Maybe you can continue this story in your multi-chap nalu smut fic?Because this is one of the hottest nalu smuts I have ever read, and Id really love if you continue it. Only if you want to though (: To be honest, I just really, reaaallyy want to see Natsus reactions when Lucy gives him a blowjob, or when they have sex for real. It'd be so overwhelming for him right? I'll only know if you continue this fic lml. Anyway, amazing job!
dogsrcool5 chapter 1 . 10/24/2015
Its good
Nora chapter 4 . 8/20/2015
dang it xD i thought for sure there's another chapter here. thank you for continuing this story by the way, i did remembered reading your so dense? chapter 1 before it was being updated :)
Punkerjj27 chapter 1 . 8/8/2015
In this paragraph,
He grabbed her shoulder as he switched their positions, so that she was laying down on the couch, with him on all flours, caging her in, their lip lock never breaking.
You put flours not fours and it kinda ruined the mood. Yeah
Other than that Love the teaser. Lol
tillaah chapter 3 . 7/19/2015
Wow, I'm a fan of your drabbles and I realized I never read this story. Despite the teasing (you really like that huh) it is a damn good story. I think that when it comes to your writing the more details, the better it gets. I noticed that with one of your drabble (the meeting). I know it needs more work but you should try to write longer stories like that, you're really good at it :). Good job
ChaoticCandiCandy chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
Lucy! You liar!
Sleepinginthegarden2257 chapter 3 . 7/3/2015
I wish that you would have dragged it on and made it longer because you are an amazing writer and I'm in love with this story!
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