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I cannot put into words how brilliant I think this is. Both the story and the concept. I think that Dana would have been the only one who Max could really talk to and trust with her secret, even if proof was needed (because let's face it, would anyone really believe it without proof?). I know that Warren was told during the storm before Max rewound, but I feel like it isn't too justified as really anyone would want to believe that something could get them out of that mess and away from death. He even said 'just in case we don't get out of this' if you choose to kiss him, implying that he probably doesn't completely believe what you're saying. I really wish there was an option like this in the game, since I can really see Dana supporting Max with this just like you wrote in this story. I also love that Dana is blunt with Chloe and makes her realise how badly she's messed up.

On that note, I'd also like to say: ASfARFJIERFJAERF PRICEFIELD! Okay, I'm good now.

In all seriousness, though, I really hope I see some more stories like this out there. Dana rarely appears as a key character, and I'm pretty sure there are only a handful on this site with her under 'main character', and this is probably the only one where she is told about Max's powers, and you've got the personalities of Max and Chloe spot on as well.

oh man these chapter's are so good :) can't wait for chapter 4

Excellent, excellent, excellent, and more excellence! I am super happy how this turned out but PLEASE do not stop writing this story! You have so much material to work on here and you can make your own ending to Life is Strange with this!

There was another story called Rebel Girl which I love a lot among a lot of these fanfics but this could tie with it. You have potential with fanfics my friend. Please continue the excellent job here.

Great story so far. Can't wait to read more.

This fic is awesome so far! I love to see how Chloe is showing how she cares about Max! Usually the fics are about Chloe being hurt one way or an other. But I really like how you showed Max's feelings! Great fic and I hope you'll make more soon!

Omg moar pretty please this is getting so good 10/10 I wish/hope this would be a route in future episodes we can only hope

Mooooooooooooore pleeeeaaase