Reviews for the voice, louder |
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Cococauldroncakes chapter 1 . 4/9 Perfect |
goldie24 chapter 1 . 3/3/2019 Wow love the ending |
sorryspence chapter 1 . 8/22/2017 This is great. I love the idea of them being able to hear each other, and you put it very nicely into a story. Thanks for sharing :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2015 This is such a great fic 333333 |
Near chapter 1 . 10/16/2015 THIS IS SO CUTE! Absolutely adorable! I hope there's a sequel to this :-) Nice job ! Xx |
Lmb111514 chapter 1 . 7/25/2015 Brilliant job on this, I loved it. |
DC chapter 1 . 5/27/2015 CRap haha I realised the sister fic is in sirius' perspective going to read it now |
DancingChestnut chapter 1 . 5/27/2015 Wow, this is beautiful. I love how you linked up the bit at the front about Padfoot easing Remus' breathing to the end where he is left "plenty, plenty breathless". I also adore the concept of the soulmate and I would really love to see things from Sirius' perspective? Your writing is as always beautiful and evocative but you might want to check through more thoroughly (sorry, grammar nazi). For example, you used "whole" instead of "hole" at the start of the story and slipped into present tense at one point. Jiayou! Hehe. Love, DancingChestnut |
NeonDomino chapter 1 . 5/27/2015 I love this just as much as I loved the other one. Just imagining Sirius' voice and him apologising to Remus when Remus told him to go away! I don't even have words, just that this is amazing! |