Great fic so far; can't wait to see where this goes :)

It was very good, waiting for update.

Interesting story. Naruto x Vados seems the best pairing to tell the truth...
Thank you for your hard work, I'm looking forward for more!

Great story I really liked it please continue it soon.

I have really come to fall in love with your less serious stories by now. I am not usially a big fan on Naruto/DB crossover mainly because of my problems with the later series. But I am finding this story extremely interesting.

As far as the pairing goes I am honestly hoping for a harem. I was thinking something similar to what Noodlehamer does in his Naruto Crossover series. Since Naruro is immortal, he has an immortal "wife" or "main girl" that can always live him. This way he doesn't have to constantly lose everything every 5 or 6 decades. Along with her however, he has a harem (size varies) of girls from all over the multiverse. If not some of the names I would suggest are.:
- Vados is a given seeing how she is also immortal
- Ayame. Childhood crush turned hot young woman. Lots of potential.
- Caulifa. For the female saiyan goodness.
- Chichi. Because she deserves better than San "I wouls rather stay dead and train for 7 years than be with my family" Goku.
- Mai. Obviously you would reverse the aging effect.
- That one female God of Destruction who looks like Cleopatra. She would be either a no-strings-attached fuck buddy or "share" the top spot with Vados since they both have fairly long lives.

On the other hand, women I don't want him to be with it:
- Definitely NOT Bulma. Her and Vegeta are by far the best couple in the series.
- Android 18 if only because I don't like the idea of her cheating on and leaving Krillin, and you also already have that story. Unless you want to make Krillin cheat on her with his ex Marlon. In thay case feel free.
- Videl. Gohan deserves all the love he can get. And Pan deserves to grow up in a functional family.

Girls I wouldn't mind him being or having a one night stand with:
- Launch. Always found her quite funny
- Kale. Not too much of a fan of Broly. So I don't really care for Female Broly.
- That one blonde girl who is a classmate of Gohan in High School.

More please! This is awesome!

Ayame, I'm begging you! There's only like a handful of Naruto/Ayame pairings in all of fanfiction! The sheer fact someone who's had such an impact on Naruto's life in canon and not getting hardly any recognition for it is almost criminal! God knows if I wasn't so shitty about writing fics I'd write one myself I would. Ayame's got a great personality, compared to Sakura's rapid mood swings that go from bullish brute to wallflower at the drop of a hat Ayame's all gentle and kind. Hinata maybe kind and gentle but she's too shy. Ayame doesn't have that quality.

Let's not rule out the fact ayame was an enforcing reason he left in the first place. If you didn't put her in the pairing without a ridiculously good reason it would be like all the training he went through would have been with no good reason. All the effort he put in would be cheapened.

Other girls are fine and dandy but Ayame really doesn't get the respect or "screen time", for lack of a better term, that she deserves.

Well you've heard my opinion on the pairing. So far I'm really enjoying the story. Really thankful you went ahead and time skipped over his training. I definitely don't mind reading about it in small margins through flashbacks but dedicating more than half a chapter on it at a time is simply too much. It actually gets annoying after awhile seeing as how no one else seems to do it.

As far as I can tell grammar is fine, won't claim to be especially good at grammar but what I've seen is pretty good. Flow of the story is ok to. But I have to question if you killing off Orochimaru was a good idea so early on. He had a lot of potential for side arcs and other plot bunnies. I'll give it to you that he is a common plot point in many fanfiction a but few actually use their own creativity to come up with something new regarding him. He's a schemer and a scientist but everyone always ignores the scientist part in favour of making him a schemer. And when that side of him is used it isn't used to it's max potential. You could have actually given Naruto a rare challenge if Orochimaru hadn't been killed off by allowing Orochimaru to make a clone of Naruto or injecting his DNA into himself. Maybe get an OC to teach Orochimaru about Ki to make himself a threat.

But from what I've seen so far you've probably got something planned for later so I'll hold off on that for now.

UPDATE!

Loving the story. I do honestly believe that you are one of the best writers active on , I read a lot of your work and all of it is great even if I avoid some because of my own lack of interest in the fandoms. Don't much care aboit the pairings, but I'm sure whatever you go with will be masterfully written. Thank you for the story MIKE

VADOS IS THE SHIP

Ayame! We need more stories with Ayame!

Naw, Gary. My name's MIKE. Get that through your head. Also, I won't be killing myself.

Kys Ryan Duff. Kys Ryan Duff. Kys Ryan Duff.

Yes yes yes YESSSS! THAT WAS AWESOME I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHERE ELSE YOU GO WITH THIS.

Loving it! Can't wait for the next chapter!