Nice and interesting story

Noice

Nice!

Here's hoping Shirou wings Kazehana at a later point. Looking forward to more!

hope Shirou will wing Akitsu somehow

needs editing

So.. Is Shirou the son of Miya and Takehito?

Not all humans could become an ashikabi. Takehito Asama is the best example.

Good story? no actions yet and full talk.

I genuinely cannot wait for the inevitable meeting with Miya

How did I miss 5 chapters I never know...anyways nice buildup...but curious about the A/N.

Will u stop uploading new chapters on and stick to patreon or is patreon just faster access?

Ty for the update! The story is good and take is onw time, keep it up!

As good as the story is, like many other review here suggest...You may need to delve more in the lore of Fate to understand their power level and such. Additionally even Rin can theoretically freezes an entire warehouse with enough preparation. Sekirei is just better than even intermediate Magus but still miles beneath any servants. Whether Akitsu can beat Lorelei is highly doubted for example.

...I kind of had this vision of Akitsu saying "because my master is a wiseass" when Kazehana asked how he was even alive after meeting Karasuba... but that's impossible. It is impossible because Akitsu never learned cheeks.

Still, i'm not entirely sure if everything is worth the wait, more because it feels like nothing was getting done. Still, you did worked on it, so that's a plus. Now i just have to patiently wait to see what happen next before swarming you with questions.

Keep up the good work.

amazing story so far