this is the very first divine!Taylor that I have ever read, except for those pseudo divine given by shard. But it's a shame that this story is a dead one, I wonder what the ending would be like.

while i'm glad it's not a full crossover, a part of me is still sad we wont see Taylor summoning Dragon-Heads as finishers for the Lumen version of Wicked Weaves.

Also, Light Speed much? i love it.

The Angels, and even the Infinite One himself, are flawed, and i like that.

Imagine what would happen if some of the Virtues saw media with new ways to wield their concepts...Sapientia would then be giving Leviathan a goddamn smackdown is what.

I'm also quite interested in what they'll do about Ziz. She seems to have a bit of a will of her own after all...

Found the overall handling of panacea's sexuality to be slightly homophobic...
The healing of panaceas attraction to her sister but not her orientation is a redeeming factor but Taylor's statement that glory girls power influenced her orientation to begin with is troublesome.

I was honestly hoping for some of the weirder angels, like the one with 4 heads each of a different animal facing the 4 cardinal directions or the one that’s interlocking wheels covered in eyes with a flame in the center, etc. I do like the ones you’ve introduced and the fact you didn’t stick with winged humans, but I’ve always enjoyed reactions to angels who don’t even seem like they should be alive much less a divine creation of God

Taylor: "what kind of psycho would be giddy at the idea of obtaining the power to literally rewrite reality"
Me: *slowly raises hand*

*brain makes that's what she said jokes* stop. *brain gets even worse* no, enough.

very good

put i mean

you know it all went good but the moment you pet the Hell in free reign that just make the book more than drama with the attractions you better think fast because a complete book is the thing will make it worth the look

I don't know. My first impression is that at this stage using Shadow Stalker as her rival seems incredibly lame.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! NOOOOOOOOOOOO! YOU NEED TO CONTINUE! IM NOT WVEN RELIGIOUS AND I LOVE THIS STORY!,!

Your grammar killed this. It really did. The plot is awesome. The grammar though, had this sounding like a bad highschool play. Find an Editor that's both English and aware of how 'Too Perfect English' can kill a fic.

You have a recurring typo. Every time you should have written competition, you wrote concurrence instead. Concurrence means agreement, not a rival.

Making people forget would be a violation of free will. To borrow Harry Potter terminology, the only real differences between a series of carefully phrased memory charms and the Imperius Curse is the Imperius is quicker to cast and easier to break.

Your fic is amazing, it gave me a new interest in cristian mythology. If I may ask, are you planning to pair Taylor to someone? I'll admit I'm partial torwards some of the "greek gods" if you know what I mean.

I hope you will be able to update soon, xoxo.