such a promising start j hope there will be more in the future

I hope you feel better soon or you are feeling better now. I know how depressed can be like so if you ever need to talk to someone to talk to I'm always available or if you just need someone to listen to you

Script format isn't allowed, even for just this chapter.

Wow. New twist. :)
How I miss Kidd.

Oh Itami, why' so cute?
I hope she could talk soon. Looking forward for more KillerXItami moments.

And where's my Kidd?! He's missing.. haha
~enjoyed the chapter

lol hilarious

It's a cute story and I really like Itami's devil fruit, its unique :)

XD Hopefully nobody else will catch on either at all or too soon to her hair color around Killer. :p

OMG! KilXItami is sooooo cuteeeeee!
I was strolling around in filters earlier when I saw 'New Friends' was updated then the first thing that came to my mind is, how about SCARRED ONE?!
Then i read your notes saying that you'll update it soon but I wasn't expecting this early.
Anyway, she's happy with Killer by her side, how sweet. This fic is really good. Even the chapter is a bit short, I felt fuzzy inside each of their interactions. XD

I can also relate to you, I'm not good at writing. I just actually recently started and I want to improve my writing too. :)

P.S. The grammar, portrayal, length are significant but regardless of that I think that the most important thing is the readers are enjoying each chapter. And this fic is definitely an enjoyable one.

This fic is very nice. You should continue this author-san. Itami is so CUTE and she has an intriguing character. Her devil fruit powers is also unique and awesome. And I love the way you portray the Kidd pirates.
And as a friendly advice I just want to suggest that you could also give more description in every scenes and make the chapter longer to make it even more better.

Among your fics, this is really the best one and it's such a waste to leave it hanging.

-Xliaf27

Huehuehue, this is great! I can't wait for the next chappie!

Damn awesome chapter but really wished you didn't have to bring up big brother Ace and papa Whitebeard *cries uncontrollably*T-T

Please update story is awesome

Great story so far! Can't wait for more!