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Nice story. I like how you mixed the right amounts of loving moments and lemon scenes. Good job

I realized now I'm only commenting on your *cough cough* lewd scenes and stories but really I love everything you've written so far that I've read. You're really great and I enjoy reading your fanfics.

I love it!

I definitely see what you mean. You've certainly focused on the element of trust in their relationship, and parts were so fluffy I was biting back a massive grin. Perfect characterisation, nice descriptive language and very easy to read.

Don't really read lewd stories, but just like the rest of your work it was a good read.

Hot and sexy. I love it. Thank you.

I'm not good at reviewing (lewd) stories, but I at least wanted to let you know I liked this one. At first I expected Weiss to have some weird toys, but I think I liked this better in the end, it felt more intimate. Also, she was being adorably caring for Ruby :)

PS: minor typo, it says '...making her her hips downward,'

Heheheheh, I always like it when Weiss somehow gets... jealous over Crescent Rose, 'cuz Ruby almost always calls it, her baby.

The massage is really nice.. and the bondage, It's kinda funny because Weiss is somehow nervous about it. XD

Again, another amazing and fantastic work from you. Thank you.~

Another fantasticly writen and captivating work of art. I can't put in words how amazingly talented you're. You keep the White roses pristine and in bloom, and I can't convey enough how thankful I am to be able to experience and admire your work. You Rock. ;3

Hey, you brought it back! I don't know why you took this down in the first place, but whatever the reason it's a great one-shot.

P.S. I love your style of writing. More specifically the deeply rooted love that they feel towards one another that seems to be always implemented in your stories. It's very heartwarming to read... Even if it's *ahem* smut

A very well-written and adorable story. You have just the right mix between tender emotions and sexual content.

Massages and bondage, great ways to start a day. Great work. Though I do question that they just hopped into bed while covered in oil... eh, they can clean the sheets with the table.

I have noticed that you recently have really run with M-rated writing. Very interesting. This did seem extremely familiar and sure enough in the description, "Rewritten and re-uploaded". Naturally, I have followed every story you have put out so this one was no exception especially since now I have subscribed to you as an author. From your first M-scene in CYFMB, I must say you have really made some leaps in...shall we say "skill"? The "love" element is never missing from your fics which is really the biggest deciding factor, for me anyways. I can enjoy a story so much more when the characters actually love each other. It doesn't really feel like plotless porn so to speak which I really dislike. I have read my fair share and it's hard to get into at all.

Well in regards to this story, bondage really was never my thing but mainly because its usually portrayed in a degrading dominating manner. Oddly enough, your chapter here did quite the opposite. It wasn't done in a show of dominance but from what I was seeing, a show of trust instead. Then the characters can even talk about it normally after all is said and done. For someone that ships whiterose as hard as I do, these kinds of outcomes are the most satisfying. My apologies if it seems like I'm really ranting over just one chapter but it's just my style of reviewing. Always looking forward to...well really anything you put out. Nice work.