Reviews for Would You Rather |
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![]() ![]() Nice chapter |
![]() ![]() Cute |
![]() ![]() Now kiss |
![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() Ooh |
![]() ![]() Cool |
![]() ![]() Interesting |
![]() ![]() I loved the vanilla, starlight and now cinnamon ;) |
![]() ![]() No, more history of my birth please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think its ridiculous that people think you can't write both LoLu and LaLu. Personally, I am a fan of NaLu, and I will read them even if an author has written previous pairings. |
![]() ![]() So I just want to say that if these people are complaining purely because it's a lemon then they obviously can't read and notice it says Rated M so they walked into it themselves. I personally really quite enjoy this story and think it needs no improvements except maybe more slower on the sex to add more emotion to the story but overall I really enjoyed the story! Keep up the great work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story was so cute! |
![]() ![]() Boring! |
![]() ![]() You made her dancing sound like stripper dancing! So gross! Blah! otherwise, pretty good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its good. Please write more |