Fantastic job! The dialogue is flawless. :)

This fanfic was awesome. I could actually picture the characters bickering about flammable bananas in my head. It was a good laugh. Thanks for sharing! :)

Lol, it's like a conversation between a misbehaving child and their parent...which, well...pretty much sums up the relationship between Sherlock and John, really...

You have mastered the art of each character. I loved it. Totally something that would happen between them. I would check for typos- I say as I find yet another one of my typos- maybe get a beta. The position Sherlock was in when John entered was PERFECT! Love it.

Haha! Love this. Dear sherlock and his experiments.