Really like this story, hope you get around to writing more soon !

Awesome!

Good chapter. I wonder how Link will react to the truth when/if he finds out? Also, I'm going to guess that the intruder is Ganondorf.

HOLY HECK. i love this fic! the change in timeline / what happened after OoT is such a cool idea, and you're doing it very well! ALSO the build up of Link almost kissing Zelda was VERY WELL DONE! i look forward to any updates in the future :) !
-intergalacticclouds

Loved the update! It's been awhile but that's okay, your take on the story is still on our minds.

I enjoy the liberties, I've played the games often enough to know the story by heart, it's nice to see your ideas.

I really hope you start updating this again soon. I understand you have other stories going on but it's been 4 1/2 months lol

Hm, so Link perhaps knows more than we were originally led to believe. This is an interesting development. I certainly can't wait to see what this means for the future.

A good chapter, and I'll be awaiting the next one.

Love it please update soon

Good stuff glad I found this keep up the good work but I do wish for Link to somehow get his memories back for two reasons one being that it would be a good twist if done right and plus I like Link playing with a full deck if you know what I mean it only seems fair and two I would love to see Zelda explain wiping his memories and or not telling him his other life and also explain why in the other life she didn't tell him she was Sheik it's not like he can't keep a secret right? I think that it would be hilarious but all an all love the fic keep up the good work update soon please

Thanks for that reply;) i guess you do put much thought into your work and it pays off, really;) (i wish i was so dedicated xP) i know all about that "painful to look back on"xD hm... what if those good parts don't fit any of the scenes? or what if they fit if something else happened, on which you decided not to make it happen?:P and that's nice if you can write with background music, because i can't- i either focus on writing or on music, cannot on both xD thanks anyways, i'll try to keep it in mind while writing myself:) (you're doing an awesome job, btw:D)...
haha, nice save with the hookshot:D though i wonder how Link actually acquired it, since in this 'timeline' he didn't need to go to either Kakariko Graveyard or Water Temple;P he cannot be a tomb raider o.O (not that he isn't...) or maybe someone else robbed that tomb, and Link only stole it from them, i guess... anyways, except for its unexplained appearance i liked it:D
and again nice change into Link's point of view to get a hold of his thoughts when he's surprised by Zelda's skills, which she, theoretically speaking, doesn't have but has them due to her memory... Neat!:D and her wasting time to try to blind the guards with the Deku Nut, great reference!:D (i was always upset when Sheik did that to escape, i mean, we could talk it over, he needn't to escape:/ we could be friends...Q-Q *cough*, anyways...)
another cliffhanger, how can you do this to us?xD i mean, Link had the mark on his hand previously? if not, now Zelda could tell him what powers he can use;) if yes, maybe he knew what to do from the start? or maybe it was his first time doing this and thanks to that maybe, just maybe, he could start remembering 'things':D well, it's only up to you, what you'll serve us and, as probably you can't tell, i can't wait to know what will unfold due to this!:)
Thanks for writing and keep up the awesome work you're doing for us!:)

An interesting take on post-OoT, where instead of Link remembering (as is canonical, if MM and TP are to be believed) Zelda is the only one who remembers. It certainly leads to a different, unused path of storytelling.

Certainly, I enjoy what I'm reading so far. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter, count on that.

Wonderful four chapters.

why would that bother us? this is your story and any new ideas are interesting to read about, so don't worry and good luck with presenting them:)
does that mean that Nabooru is back to normal? i surely wish so and also wish that she will come to her senses quickly so she'll save Zelda and Link from angry guards:P because they are in so much trouble right now... but good thing Link managed to make it in time to "rescue" her;) almost all was gone before he showed up;P
i hope the Gerudo won't hurt them too much until Nabooru wakes up, but only time will show:P and nice idea with the handcuffs making Zelda unable to use magic:) though if they can be easily picked up by a hairpin then i don't know if it's a smart imprisonment device xD
thanks for the chapter and can't wait for the next one!:)

I think the story is progressing really well. The amount of magic and interplay in the world is befitting of the power of the triforce. The abilities are all easily fitting within what the characters should be able to do.

Thank you so much for keeping up with the world.

You're right, though i think it's why Link and Zelda can communicate with each other in various games, or more like- Zelda appears to Link or tells him to do something in mind space or something like that (mindscape, hehe:P) or maybe it's the connecting through dreams ability? But there's a third piece of Triforce, so if Ganondorf was close enough (like, behind Link) he should have heard what she told him:) i dunno:P
Nice change of the narration for Link:) though once you wrote in first person instead of third:P i can't wait for Link to spectacularly save Zelda from the clutched of these evil Gerudo;) what is wrong with Nabooru anyways? Again with some enchanted jewels? Since she has so many of them- either that they all are connected in a web of control over her (whatever that means o.O) or that only one is controlling her but the rest is to make it harder to find the one responsibile;) meh, i wonder how you'll make it work:)
another great chapter, can't wait for the next!:)
(Zelda is holding on pretty well, good luck, girl!:))