Reviews for A Second Attempt at Life
dogwoodfarm62 chapter 29 . 12/1/2019
This is a wonderful story! I always lean towards the marriage law stories and this one is right on the mark. Keep up the writing.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/20/2019
No one living at Hogwarts can be affected by the law since all of them are residents of Scotland, not England.,,Fred and George can also move to Hogsmeade from Diagon Alley.
Musical-Mel chapter 29 . 11/19/2019
I read this all in one night and I really, really like it thus far. I think you’ve done a good job with the character development, and I loved seeing Hermione mourn the loss of her baby. I’m not sure about where you live, but where I am, miscarriage is rather a taboo subject. People don’t talk about it and a woman is supposed to just be okay after a week or so when one happens, especially if it’s early.
Lois Ross chapter 29 . 11/9/2019
I must say, I find the story quite intriguing. I do wish it had a bit more happiness to it it seems quite sad. But I understand that once you have an idea in your head you can’t really change it. Muses are quite finicky that way. I am enjoying how it is a slow thing between our favorite couple. I hate the ones where there is a marriage law and then all the sudden they’re in love. So seeing it take time is nice. Keep up the great work. And I hope to see more from the story soon.
RhodaBush chapter 29 . 11/8/2019
More when you can please
ZoeyOlivia chapter 29 . 11/7/2019
Gah! Babies really are healing little buggers! It takes some time to come out of it, and the man suffers as well. Just a touch less but they can and do still feel the loss keenly!
Tater-K chapter 29 . 11/7/2019
Loved it! I’m glad Severus was able to get comfort too.
RhodaBush chapter 28 . 11/4/2019
More soon please
Guest chapter 28 . 10/30/2019
Conversation is good. Not much was said, but the feelings came across non the less.

I'm curious, is the title referring to Hermione and Severus learning to live and love each other or a the possibility of another baby. Maybe both?
Poledne chapter 28 . 10/28/2019
Hello dear, thank you for the new chapter. Excellent.
Guest chapter 27 . 10/27/2019
I hope a new chapter will be posted soon! I totally understand how hard it must be to navigate the high emotion of where the story is right now, but I think you’re doing it really well! I’m so interested in how Hermione will approach Severus about the letter and how they will go forward.

You’re doing great! Can’t wait to keep reading x
Guest chapter 27 . 10/11/2019
The guilt Severus feels must be unbearable, to have a possible cure come too late. It makes my heart hurt to think Hermione may blame him or herself even more for not being able to keep the pregnancy viable a little longer and make use of the cure.

As for your concern this may be too dark, I have hope sunshine isn't too far off or least there will be a parting of the clouds.
ZoeyOlivia chapter 27 . 10/10/2019
Feel this. Mental health is important so very important! My 12 year old has had a rough year so it’s something we’ve dealt with a ton!
FrancineHibiscus chapter 27 . 10/10/2019
Oh, so much miscommunication! Strife! But not everything can be fluffy, right? As long as it all works out in the end.
Guest chapter 15 . 10/7/2019
Was reading through your story and was wondering if you were of Sindhi descent. Your story seems to have elements of Sindhi culture in it. Sorry if I am wrong, I am not that culturally aware as I would like be.
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