i dont understand why shougo need to leave tho'
just stay for a night wont you?

oh? a sadist pov! thank you for making this one! at least now we know what shougo thought about kagura.

lol kagura is a tsundere!

its too late but i just watched Be Forever Yorozuya and man, kagura is otherworld-ly gorgeus. therefore, there's no way this sadist wont love her back. no way in hell.

if that happen. I WILL RIOT.

T . AMAZING!
I really really REALLY love this story, it's just so good,
sorry for not reviewing to each chapter, I read it all at once.
please continue it, and I think it would be better if possible if Kagura get pregnant, so please PLEASE continue this story

I really really really love this story, and I've read it five or six times and won't get tired of it, so please PLEASE CONTINUE IT, PLEASE
and I think the story would be better if possible if Kagura get pregnant
sorry for not reviewing before but I really love your works

is this ending? i am confused. I prefer she is pregnant, married nd hpoy ending. maybe gintoki come back again and everuthing better again. but this...? good story but i dissapoint with the ending

I love this story! I'm shocked that it has so little favs and comments tho.
I know you said you're not a native English speaker (I'm not one myself) , but damn, you're speech is amazing, there are some errors here and there but taking that aside is almost perfect!
the dialogues feel natural, the way you describe backgrounds, objects and characters is beautiful and appealing.
you're very good at sentence construction, I was really surprised when you said English wasn't your mother tongue!
I just have one question (and please don't be offended) why did okita get so mad? I know this was a long time ago and maybe you're never gonna read this, but hey, a girl can dream XD
thanks for giving me a great time while reading this! I'm off to read more of your works of art!

What an excellent story, I am very curious about the sadist's feelings, thank you very much for writing

My heartbeat trifled when i saw you in the updated list, moreover for this fic. I have always came back here, again and again, reread this fic for maybe 4-5 times, kept recommending it to everyone in the fandom, drew few fanarts based on this, even wrote a fic closely resembled this setting. I love this and you, and any of the ending prompt is great, as long as its yours. Happy ending is a good ending, and even as the last chapter suggested (home), thats already good enough. They should just know their love for each other at this point, and in the world where Kagura felt there's nowhere to go, she found Sougo. I will take the pregnant route, and imagined as if you have already written that. Now its complete. Thank you so much. Thank you for infinity. I love you, and this fic, will forever be my favorite.

not only im surprise cuz there's suddenly an update on the story, and feeling damn lucky visiting my gmail after a year and found this notification update today BUT IM SURPRIZE THAT THE AUTHOR CAN ALSO BE SO MYSTERIOUS~ now i can say its not only her stories drug me addicted, but IT SEEMS THE AUTHOR IS REALLY MANIPULATING ME WELL, IM SO GRATEFUL U ARE BACK AND THE STORY IS STILL A BLAST ! UR FAN ! LOVE YOUUUU 3

I'm so grateful you decided to update and share these prompts and tidbits with us :)) I almost started crying when I saw that you updated this. I know it's been a week, but I needed to prepare myself for this emotionally (rip me) and I was not disappointed! Sure, it's a shame they never confessed to each other but this chapter honestly made up for a lot of it. Just knowing you had it in the back of your mind is more than enough for me :))

That said, this will always be one of my absolute favourites. I've reread it countless times and will definitely come back in the future, so please be reassured that you've created something wonderful right here :))

este fic es uno de mis favoritos, sólo superado por tu One-shot "las cosas que llegan sin previo aviso", y eso es solo porque este One-shot es el fic que más veces he releído. de hecho, quiero mencionar que gracias "pieces" comencé a leer en historias en inglés.
fue una alegría ver "pieces" finalmente actualizado y me puse como loca cuando vi que la historia estaba marcada como terminada. luego leí el capítulo y cómo persona todos comprendemos que el tiempo pasa y que aunque queramos la cosas no son iguales. cómo antigua lectora de este fic, y de tantas historias sin terminar solo puedo darte las gracias. gracias por escribir esta historia, gracias por toda la dedicación que le has dado, gracias por mantenerla en tus pensamientos y gracias por este último capítulo.
este, el capítulo 16 fue evidentemente muy distinto del tipo de capítulos que le precedían, pero a su vez es especial pues al leerlo entrega una sensación de cercanía entre el autor y sus fantasmagóricos lectores. me agradaron tus ideas para este fic y creo que cualquiera de ella hubiera podido encajar en esta historia. yo sería feliz con cualquiera de ellas. nuevamente, quiero agradecerte por no dejar esta historia a la deriva, por darle un final, por darle un contexto y por último por darnosla versión extendida del comienzo de pieces", esto si que no me lo esperaba y me ha encantado, ha sido todo un regalo.
supongo que pasara mucho tiempo antes de que pueda leer otra historia tuya o, quién sabe, un capítulo 17 de "pieces". lo cierto es que este fic seguirá alto entre mis favoritos y espero que siga aquí para poder releerlo a medida que pase el tiempo.

I honestly couldn’t believe my eyes when I saw that you updated this fic, it left me so happy, this is honestly one of my favorite okikagu fanfictions, and I lost count on how many times i reread it, I just enjoyed it so much but I would always become sad whenever I reached the 15th chapter cause I knew there weren’t more to read, and I honestly thought you had abandoned it for real, but I’m so happy you decided to update it, although we ended up, unfortunately, not seeing them coming clean about their feelings, it still left me happy just knowing that you had this fic in your mind this whole time and took time to give us some prompts you wanted to write (and we would’ve loved to read) and a final chapter, it broke my heart seeing Kagura’s path to end up living with tsukuyo but then again this fic is all about angst and that’s what makes it so good, once again, thank you so much for this beautiful fic and wonderful times of my life I had reading it, I hope to see more of you in the future

Okay... I didn't see that coming. I thought I'll never see the day that this will be updated ohmy it feels like my birthday. Thank you so much!