Reviews for Morning
Child of Loki chapter 1 . 8/11/2015
After many months, I finally felt the need for some nallen, and what a treat to find this delicious morsel. Your writing is always so enjoyable and I especially love your characterizations of Nell and Callen. Utterly beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing it. Definitely satisfied my craving. But I wouldn't object to more.
Allison Diamond chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
Ooh, this is very nice. I love the similes and metaphors; they make this so much interesting to read. I love how the descriptions of Nell have a poetic feel to them.

Nell's that succulent flavor that Callen just has to get. Lust has nothing to do with his desires or wants; but raw passion, deep admiration, and maybe love, the slightest possibility of love, in a way. He loves that he can untangle her so easily, loves that he always has a sweet reward, loves that he feels good when he's with her. She's his distraction from work. He wants to please her in every possible way, and he knows how to.

I really like this; it's a fun short piece. Um, I think this should be under "M" as it has some explicit images, even if it's sometimes vaguely. There are a few typos here and there. I do like your writing, so if you ever want me to read anything of yours or suggest some recommendations, just tell me. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to reading more of your writing.
gulltranquilot chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
Why why why can't this be the relationship that exists on the dang show?! I love Nallen. Thanks for writing.
bjq chapter 1 . 5/12/2015
fabs
shestarsky chapter 1 . 5/11/2015
Well this put some interesting pictures in my mind. I'm thinking I should not have read it at work. But who could resist? Great job.
alix33 chapter 1 . 5/11/2015
This was very cute.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2015
Love this
niagaraweasel chapter 1 . 5/11/2015
Holy hormone overload, this is wonderful! Absolutely the best way to start off a new workweek ;-).