First off, this was absolutely adorable. Secondly, there were quite a few grammatical errors in there. Some sentences were confusing to read, as were the transitions. One paragraph they're in the kitchen, the next they're in the bed with no explanation. But like I said before, it was pretty cute.

Precious

Just like in the episode, this made me feel a lot of things, and I both hate it and love it.

Loved your insights into these characters' minds. Please write more!

love the stories..please write more..