Ep 4 is Vic. Just sayin'.

Chhllloooeeeeeeeee! "sobs" Twice this game has had me break down sobbing.
If your taking requests then I've noticed a depressingly small amount of dana in fics. Dana deserves recognition! She's like the beautiful, kind older sister to max's adorable nerdiness.

Do Nathan next! It was implied that his and Victoria's families have pretty strong relations. It would be interesting to see his viewpoint. This fic is really interesting. Keep up :)

This is really, really cool, oh my god. I love how you describe Max and Vicky's dyanmic through other characters so well. Despite being background characters, I can hear them speaking whenever I read because of how true to the game they are - which is specially cool since we tend to ignore them as we play. Great job and I look forward to the rest.

I thought this was going to be a one shot. Thank you for making it a story! :3 The way It's written is pretty original , looks cool

This is pretty good, I hope you write more