great one shot

Oh my, this is so beautiful! :) Your descriptions of these characters and their turmoil is amazing. You really capture and relate all of that depth, making it so visually vivid. I love Kai's character, love all the development which took place with him. It's such a shame that we'lll never get to see anything like this in the show. He really was one of the most beautifully deep characters they had created. I really appreciate how you depicted them each feeling such complete acceptance from the other, that complete ability to freely be themselves without expectation of judgement. It was almost poetic :) This is a wonderful story and a wonderful insight into a beautiful pairing.

Gurrll I don't know why it took me so long to find out that you write stories! You should have told me sooner I love this story it was straight fire! Or should I say wildfire and it has fueled my sad Bonkai heart. It was beautifully written and I love it.

update please

Gosh that kiss!

This is what should have played out between them. They have shared very similar experiences recently and should have been allowed to bond over that. You did a great job laying down that foundation. I hope we will see more Bonkai fanfic from you, since that is the only place their story will be allowed to be told.

Oh god I really need a tissue now. *cry cry* Why, oh why could we have not watched your szenario, instead of what we had to watch on the show. This here is fantastic, brilliant and so wonderful! *sigh*
Please, please write more for them. I really love and heart this one-shot so much!

love u. awesome:) update