A really good story. I wish there was more of it. Taylor’s power is kind of weird though. She’s like the Number Man with some parts better and a lot of parts worse. The excitement over of cape car chase was fun though.

I'm enjoying this story a great deal. It's weird seeing the trio as heroes, and I'm still getting the hang of some of the new capes (or new abilities among canonical characters), but it is well-written.

this has perhaps already been addressed, but could Emma not simply use an oxygen tank in order to stay frozen alap?

Love this, hope you continue it

the actual fuck is aishas power? it needs to be connected atleast a LITTLE bit to brians why does she have a random ass power? WHY?!

I was thinking of power inventory being a power, although psychometry wasn't my first thought on how to make it better.

Firstly, I'm really enjoying this story. I started reading it straight after Atonement, and while Madison seems to be pretty much the exact same character, I like the way you've taken the others in different directions and mixed the powers up.
A minor criticism is how quickly people open up to complete strangers they've never met before about their backstory Worm makes it pretty clear that sharing details about trigger events and the like is extremely private and not commonly done.
I think you've mixed up the changes from canon and the stations of the canon really well, and I think the more proactive and Machiavellian Dinah is a great touch.

I just want to see the potential relationship of Taylor, Emma, Sophia, and Madison in the future once they all meet up one day.

Love this story, will you continue?

There's so many layers, it's like an onion!

Dinah, you conniving little shit! What genius!

Found this in November, and plan to move on to Heretical Edge now that I'm at the end if the line...
That was a great end to the chapter, and is meaningful in to the story itself. Sophia, Emma, Madison, the Faithful, Cherie, and more all suffered from their mistakes and work to justify another chance at happiness and\by bringing happiness to others.

And now I'm sad I'm at the end. Oh well. Plenty of Atonement left.

Okay now I wanna see Dinah as the Kingpin.

Dinah is a beast