That was so badass

g o oo o o oo d chp

It is a good story, I hope you continue one day, a greeting, see you bye!

The best chapter

are really going to make this harem? it will be fun. ultear, mira, ikagura, kagura, yukino x naruto so far ulness i am missing someone. also please can you do something and somehow turn naruto into immortal again? and make it fun? also somehow turn the main female love his or his whole harem if he is going to have, so that you wont have to think tooo hard for an ending in the end cause i get the feeling that you are going to have naruto die in the end. how can i guess that? simple you went out your way to turn naruto in mortal again and i dont like so please...

for some reason this chapter and itachi's revival feels like it made my life. you know since i realize itachi was the best man there was i always felt like kinda gulty, sad and regret for everything that happened to itachi i always thought he should have had more CANON time where he is not the villian. i really think he was never really much appreciated for everything he did. i mean cmon one of the biggest reasons the nations won the 4th war was itachi and noone knew. but this chapter kinda full filled my desire to see itachi not suffering for once. :) thank you.

You lost me as soon as he summoned Itachi. At that point this story pretty much just became a troll story.

As I could recall, Naruto has been eaten a total of 3 times in the whole series.
1st by Oro-chan's snake.
2nd by Isobu and 3rd by Son Goku.

Will you be continuing this?

Love this. Would love to see a reading of this

yeaaaahhh lezz go itachi

Just...why? Why do all of you authors INSIST on nerfing Naruto? WHY? Do not give the make it interesting spiel either. This story was plenty interesting until you nerfed him.

I have enjoyed this fic. I really have. I also enjoy the fact that you have made Naruto senile. Although I do think that you go overboard sometimes and there is also a case of swift character development or sudden behavioural changes. There is always a huge difference in Naruto’s fighting abilities in different situations which irks me as well. The confusion of yellow flash, red devil and his hair colour is also palpable. Point is that even though it is a flawed story, it is your story and has a unique taste to it which I like.

Also is this a crack fic?

You really need to edit this. Everything is all over the place because you time skip all the important things. It gets really confusing. Also, I advise you to re-read your work or get a beta-reader. There’s a lot of spelling and grammar errors in this story/fanfic.

This chapter was just all over the place...