Valerie was definetly the worst part of the story. Someone had to say that. She is here just to be here, has no real purpose in the story and overall she is annoying as hell.
But except for that the story is pretty good.

So now I think the chapters do all link but still I'm finding this adorable so I love it so far :)

I really liked this chapter's story (since its a collection of shorts would I be correct in thinking that each chap is a different story? I assume so. But this would be a good one to carry on. I would love to see how it progresses because I can imagine this happening before the years of GLaDOS' Aperture Science).
I think its really cute and its getting a favourite regardless of the rest of the stories whether I like them or not. Though I most likely will because of the first :)

This is amazing. This has to be one of the best Portal fanfics I have read.

aaaahhhHHHHHHH OMG! WOW, I knew Jason was going to be Rick. Whyyy would he wippe his memmoorryy? awesome chapter! :D

Omg! Awww, wow, well that was a twist! Cheers :D

Ooooh, this is really cool. I like how you briefly explained a little procedure, and I'm still pretty surprised you actually came up with the idea to have Chell design the core. :D

That was beautiful and horrible all at once! Excuse me for a minute while I try to nourish my aching feels.

OH MY GOD NO I KNEW WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN AHHHHHHHHHHH WHEATLEY MY POOR PRECIOUS ROBOT THAT PAST THOUGH HELP I CANT

Anyone who read that other comment, please don't listen to it. I'd take it back if I could in a heartbeat.

This story is great and the author actually took the time to take the picture down, so this time, I actually have come to give this story the reserve that it needs.

It is well-written (for the most part), and its chapters are decent in length.

I hope to see the next installment, soon. I look forward to the upcoming chapters. Please, everyone, again, please don't take that other comment for granted. I believe it was a little putting-off. I apologize, dearly.

Thank you.

Best regards (I mean it), Erosion Has Started

I am not here to compliment this story.

That profile picture is STOLEN. I know the artist. And her DeviantArt.

You had no permission to use that picture.

Unless you did, I could go ask her.

I recommend you take that picture down or I WILL report you.

Best regards, Erosion Has Started

The plot thickens! Awesome!

AWW AW NOOO AUGHCSGDYSHYVNSASDFGHJKL *breathless* nice chapter :D

This story is getting better and better with each chapter! Keep up the good work!

Aww poor Chell.
Though I couldn't stop laughing at the insults Wheatley got. "Birdseed" omg xD