Reviews for Mercenary |
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Bailey pokemon chapter 4 . 2/22/2019 Eeeeek I so imagine when Marco and Ace have sex I like to think Ace might bond with Marco like in a dog a/b/o sort of way maybe bit the story is awesome please keep this story up |
shirosakura911 chapter 4 . 10/2/2017 please update .. I really want to know what happened next |
AllergicToLobotomy chapter 4 . 11/24/2016 this is based on looks only, there is no love I bet if Ace looked ugly af he wouldnt even dare invite him to the crew. |
AndurilofTolkien chapter 2 . 1/10/2016 like |
CMBrockett chapter 4 . 10/10/2015 Adorable! |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/2/2015 Love the storytelling |
MagicalKitsune chapter 4 . 6/8/2015 Awww. Poor Marco and confused Ace. Nice chapter. |
poemado chapter 4 . 6/7/2015 Yeah New update . I like your story . I still want to know what ace can do with his devil fruit but good story |
Pana-sule chapter 4 . 6/7/2015 This is getting SO good! :) |
general yumi chapter 4 . 6/7/2015 Oh my glob! I really like this chapter! I love how you wrote Shanks character. I just think you should've written the part with the time skip and the flashback a little differently. The story at that particular part didn't really flow smoothly. It left me confused and I had to reread it a few times to fully understand the situation. Plus shouldn't there be a strong reaction to the crew finding out Ace's real name? Marco and Thatch practically shrugged it off. Isn't that supposed to be a sign that he seriously didn't trust them if Ace didn't even give them his real name? Other then that I think you did a good job with this chapter author-san! |
Onee-Chan1999 chapter 3 . 5/31/2015 Hopefully the new update comes fast, I wanna see jelly Marco! |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/22/2015 Cn you do something about Luffy too? Since they both promised each other to be pirates why not make Luffy different too. Also if you take thid decision, can you make him a CP9 agent? Can you make the pairing Lucci x Luffy? I really like it. |
Shadow2wolf chapter 3 . 5/24/2015 How does ace know shanks? And is marco jealous? :P |
poemado chapter 3 . 5/23/2015 Yeah a next chapter a jealous Marco looking forwards it |
Amorphous Sapphire chapter 3 . 5/23/2015 Another fic? You're making me drool over here! |