Reviews for Milestones
Guest chapter 62 . 9/30/2018
This is fucking beautiful... like seriously! I really really really loved it! You made me cry at chapter 61... but thank goodbess there was an alternate ending. The pacing of the story was amazing. I seriously can't express how much I enjoyed this thank you so much! I love how you portrayed everyone in this. The story and character development was just right~ You made me feel their frustrations and emotions throughout the whole fic and its like i'm watching a movie in my head.

I do hope you write more stuff like this. This is probably the only miles/oc fic out here. This fic is such a gem.

Well... great work my good friend :D
yatozai chapter 1 . 2/13/2017
Was re-watching old Outlast game-play and I decided to come back and read this story! I remember how much I loved this one T_T Sad you deleted the sequel but I'm happy you kept this one up at least! 3
silkyterrier34 chapter 62 . 5/9/2016
Just got around to reading the chapter entirely now that life is settling out.

I adore this ending! Miles and Young-ja are alive and happy together! Ae-cha has her parents! Annie has her parents! Words cannot express how much I loved not just this chapter but the story as an whole! :'D

I saw the demo! Finally, the main character gets lines! So excited for the game! (Wouldn't it be cool if the creators got their idea for Blake and Lynn by reading our stories? :D Just a weird thought.)

So sorry it took so long! This chapter was phenomenal!
yatozai chapter 62 . 5/3/2016
Oh my God, this ending killed me because it was everything I hoped would happen ;_; I'm still really enjoying that you decided to give Ae-cha her own story but this ending is just great and I'm a sucker for happy ending :') haha
SlayersAnimefangirl chapter 62 . 5/2/2016
Oh my god thank you! This is the kind of ending I wanted. The original ending was too heart wrenching.
Marioexpertken chapter 62 . 5/1/2016
Tbh, I actually like this ending better haha, but I'm sure if this was the ending instead, your sequel could've been different or what.
yatozai chapter 58 . 2/17/2016
I'm back! haha And can I just say how my heart cracked a little during this chapter? :( Their love for each other and their family is just so heart-wrenching.
yatozai chapter 57 . 2/17/2016
Ohh my god, that flashback killed me with the feels because of all the fluff T_T Not saying I didn't enjoy it lol But I seriously wish we got more scenes with Miles and his family. I always loved seeing him and Young-ja as parents! Their scenes are just so damn cute and fluffy, and I'm definitely gonna go back to read more just because I want to! haha

I am planning on continuing my review-spree tomorrow because it is almost 1am here where I live XD
yatozai chapter 56 . 2/17/2016
Their bickering is seriously the best thing ever! I imagine if they met in college, oh that would be a riot! lol Prank wars and house-breaking all over the place! haha And once again, your writing is amazing and I still can not get over how perfect Miles is and how great his relationship with Young-ja 3 And Waylon is pretty awesome too ;)
yatozai chapter 55 . 2/17/2016
Duuude...can Miles be anymore damn perfect!? It makes me sad thinking about my love life, which is non-existent because I've never had a boyfriend before lmao But I would hope to get one as amazing as Miles! haha
yatozai chapter 54 . 2/17/2016
"Cara mia", "Short Stack" - oh my god, my heart was breaking and swelling at the same time. Bittersweet, I should say. I seriously love Miles. Especially the way you wrote him. And his and Young-ja's relationship is just amazing too. And I also love how, even with the situation they're in, Miles still manages to be the sarcastic ass we all know and love 3 haha

Btw, I just realized you mentioned Zelda AND Totoro in the author's notes and I love you even more lmao
yatozai chapter 53 . 2/17/2016
Damn, this chapter was intense. :( So much feels. I feel so bad for all of them. Miles' breakdown was bound to happen though. I just feel so bad. I don't know how else to explain it lol
yatozai chapter 52 . 2/17/2016
Why can't I have a Miles!? T_T He is such an awesome husband and I love him so much! haha So much angst tho! ;_;
yatozai chapter 51 . 2/17/2016
*whispers* I saw you needed a few more to be second most reviewed on the Outcast category, so I'm here to help you. *whispers and gives thumbs up*

Lmao, but I did really enjoy this chapter when I read it! Especially the beginning. Love how Miles was as a daddy when Ae-cha was just born 3
yatozai chapter 49 . 2/17/2016
I always loved how manly Miles is and how he always took good care of his girls :) It always touched me. And I love how even though they're both in a life-or-death situation, he is always still trying to protect her 3 It melts my heart which is why I was so sad for the ending of this story and am hoping for HOPEFULLY a happy ending in the sequel! haha
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