It was such a beautiful story! I loved it to bits! I loved Brian and Justin's relationship through the years...loved it all

Merci

I'm very surprised Brian is the one who's pregnant. All the other stories I've read, make it Justin. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Outtakes! For a story, seriously! These chapters should've been in their proper places included within the story. It's a story not a movie. Words, not scenes. This ruined the story. Along with other things, but I could tolerate those. Even Michael, being godfather and having a child named after him. Not at all Deserving. Having a story all over the place is beyond annoying. For something to bother me more than Michael's lack of respect for Justin, and being honored undeservingly, has landed me in a State of Shock

If it was going to be another ancient name, ( at least this one has a heartfelt meaning ) it should have been Ruby Justine. ( Michael and Michelle does not have the same meaning )

If the baby was going to be named after someone, it should have been Justin. He's her other daddy. He's the one there through everything. That's his baby, not Michael's. It's Brian and Justin! They're a couple. Not Brian and Michael

You're probably sick and tired to death of my comments, but seriously. I have to say that Brian and Michael kissing each other on the lips, is annoyingly bugging. ( a cringing moment literally ) Most of all, it's disrespectful to Justin. Saying bye to each other and maybe a hug should suffice. Brian's lips should be reserved for Justin ONLY! I'm sure that I'm not the only one who feels so strongly about Brian and Michael kissing.

Patrick is an ugly name also. It would be okay if it was back in ancient times. Patrick would be a nice name, but not today. Unless a child is being named after a grandparent or a great aunt or uncle. Then that would be something special. Just saying. . . Ancient names for children today, just bug me, unless they have great meaning or sentiment behind them. I mean, you ever meet those children who are way too cute for the name they've been branded with for life. The name they've been forced to own with absolutely no meaning or sentiment behind , they've been ruined for no good reason, for life. I don't know, maybe it's just me...

I had other comments about this story before now, but resisted the urge to do so. I'm reading the chapter with the first, maybe only, mention of the name "Ralph". I have to say that Ralph is one of the most ugliest names. I mean, Gus is also, but at least it's better than Ralph. Just had to put that out there

Great ending

FABULOUS! I love the ending its perfect!

love it

I can't believe it's over, well here anyway, although, of course, their story continues. I loved the way you ended with a repeat of Brian and Justin's meeting. No wonder that poor dolphin kept throwing Brian of its back. It wouldn't want a human invading its personal space. Thank you so much for writing this amazing mpreg fic. Happy Christmas to you.

circle of life...

What a great wrap up!