This story is absolutly brilliant! Tge pacing and the scene changes, the deviatiobs from GoT canon that can still fit into GoT canon! This is what a perfect fanfic looks like. Obly wish the chapters were longer

This story is a creative awesome read! Looking forward to future updates. So curious about shae's character .

Thanks

Man i didnt 3xpect this to be this good!

this is good worldbhklding

... please dont have your characters support daenerys when she threatesn to burn cities just because the city refused to let her in... she did come with a group of people famous for pillaging and enslaving people. qarth had no reason to let them into the city.
she was semi crazy right from the beginning.

Interesting story enjoyed it thank you

This is great! A really cool concept. (Sorry I didn't review every chapter, you know how it is.) I absolutely added this to my list can't wait for the next installment

Been awhile. Thanks for the update. Awaiting more.

This is so good

Following in the steps of another guest reviewer. I understand that we all have personal problems, and you do this as a personal hobby or to improve yourself.
But still waiting for years for you to update and being disappointed again and again its just heart breaking. You have no idea how excited I was the first time I read your story.

But over time it's just lost the spark.
Regards

Pretty fantastic chapter

Sounds interesting, but I just can't set myself up for that disappointment again (the terminal cliffie and wasted time rereading from the start as each new chapter eventually posts). In the 11 YEARS since you started posting your 6 stories, only 1 is "Complete" (and that one was a single-chapter story).

I will look forward to reading this when the "Complete" flag goes on (assuming we're both still around to see that happen). ;-)

Great chapter! Thanks for the update!

i like the story... but for all harry's power, he is fucking useless.