I love the reasoning Evan employs as he thinks about Hank and Jill. Good job-

I really liked seeing this side of Evan. In a way, I feel like he has gotten to be less boyish, and more in tune with Hank. There's always been a void with Jill leaving, and it was interesting to see Evan reflect on that. I think you did great on this story.

Nice job! Looking at Jill - and Hank - through Evan's eyes is an interesting twist. I always had mixed feelings about Jill & Hank; I thought they worked really well together as friends and colleagues, but not so much as girlfriend/boyfriend. But your story shows Evan's perspective, and I think it's sweet that Evan wants his brother to be as happy as he is!

I agree with you; I wish more people were writing RP fanfiction. I have several stories posted; check them out! Feedback is ALWAYS appreciated!