Please update. I want more during this boredom

omg your fic is so good please update !

That chapter fell like a bomb in my stomach! I'm honestly disgusted, with a lot of disgust from Severus.

I love Severus Snape, if there is a character that fascinates me is Severus! Her story and love for Lily is one of the best in the Harry Potter series, and that's why I love snily. J.K. Rowling's story can't be repeated.

His fanfic conquered me from the first chapter, and as I went deeper into the most enthusiastic reading I stayed, I confess I was getting more fascinated and obsessive as his story proved original.

I don't like Parkinson's, I believe she will still reach Voldemort, I have the impression that this will be the way... the darkness.

I'm hurt with Severus, with your enthusiasm... He promised Lily a lot, and he's cheating and breaking his promises. I'm sad!

Severus is a thoroughbred young man, you made some modifications to the character and in his story, so knowing that he is a "Draco Malfoy " Crib, I can forgive you.

Now, as Lily I hope Severus wakes up after reflecting the last few months, because honestly the storyline of your story seems to have gotten a very inexplicable hole.

I was very happy to realize that the last update was in 2018 (I add many fanfics and do not see this detail, until give a chance to read), and so I hope you can continue this fanfic. She's wonderful, congratulations.

Well, I was being broken up with my boyfriend as I reread this story... it was an excellent chapter to end on. It captures my feeling well. Waiting on the next update,
Perhaps both I and it will be a little happier.

Cool fiction! I can't wait the next chapter.!

Severus is a fool. He has to go to Lily!

Wow! Excellent! I hope Lily will go to Severus!

Severus by keeping distant makes hard days for himself and for Lily.

I'm still enjoying your story, but please: No 'Much Ado About Nothing"; the story's constant 'misunderstandings' and the characters' illogical assumptions were never my forte. Lily's sudden dismissal of 6 years of friendship for one harsh word, spoken in a moment of extreme vexation, in canon, was just another reason for my disgust with the HP series (if it weren't for all the 'fix-its', in the HPff universe I'd have NEVER become a fan!). So, I'm really confused as to why you had her pick a fight with Ara. Of course, I can't fathom why Lily is 'friends' with Sirius and James in the 1st place; they have nothing in common and share no common interests!
Anyhoo, I'm looking forward to your return.
Please, come back, soon!
Thanks!
MelJ

1st of all, its S-e-V-e-r-u-s, not SeRverus, dear.
2nd, is Severus hiding his halfblood status from his house or are his origins and background completely AU for this story?
Also, I'm slightly concerned: Though I definitely don't mean to impugn your writing ability, as you are an excellent 'stylist' and your mature content (you write like an ADULT!:-D) is very appealing; these last two chapters have contained more typos and poor word choices..."deathly" instead of "deadly", "Arthimancy" instead of "Arithmancy", than all your previous chapters. I know that I blow past the 'niceties' of writing when I get into a creative frenzy, too, but I've learned, after 55 years, to go back and proofread my content and attempt ;-) to correct and 'tweak' what my muse has forced out of my brain;-D!
Anyhoo, just thought I'd give you a little constructive and instructive critique.
Now, back to the story!
Thanks!
MelJ

I'm enjoying the story, thus far: The premise is quite original and intriguing, at least I've never read anything else like it and you definitely have my attention!
The correlation between early 1930's Germany and the pre 1st Voldy war are too great to discount; with the 1st Gen Magicals taking the place of the Jews, but since *anyone* with any trace of Jewish heritage was marked for extermination, regardless of their beliefs and/or 'support' of or usefulness to Hitler's policies, I always viewed Severus' anomalous inclusion in TMR's ranks, much less his 'inner circle', as a too forced artifice: As though JKR were attempting to downplay or dismiss Hitler's (and HIS 'DE's') rabid and murderous intentions.
You've got an interesting story building, here, and I'm very much looking forward to seeing where you take it.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination and skillful writing talents with us!
MelJ

First of all I love your story a little late the updates but you understand the reality is hard, I only found some incongruities in the last chapter is not supposed that Ara should have graduated and no longer go the train? And a reconciliation with passionate tears and kisses bay bay

Great chapter!

Lily was very offended by Severus! I can’t wait the next chapter!

I am very curious how will Lily forgave Severus this time?