Oh my goodness I fell in love with this story! You must finish it! I hope to find out what happens!

I absolutely love this story! The way you have crafted each character is amazing, I feel as if I can slip into Vivian’s shoes and experience everything she is, I would buy this from any bookstore! Truly amazing! Can’t wait for more!

I love this story. I found it a while ago and I swear I added it to my favorites. I love how it's beauty and the beast but not. Your characters are well developed and you're not rushing the love story. She didn't fall in love with him overnight or jump into his bed in a fit of lust. Please write more of this story. I really want to know what happens when she finds out about him. She has to already suspect something. I mean come on... The scar over his eye. How does he get out from under the king's thumb? PS btw: Once again, in terms of character development, the horses in your story have more depth and personality than many main characters in other fanfics.

I have to said that you write beautiful , I'm in love with your history . Is perfect the way you describe the emotions of love and sorrow in this history .

I hope that feast was to try and impress her !

I like the mystery of this twist in the curse

I love your story already

I greatly enjoyed your story. I hope you can come back to it when you can. I would love to read more!

Hey, I know I'm a bit later than you last posted this but I just found it and I have to say I'm in love! The main character so developed in a way which makes it hard not to feel something for them. I love the way write, it better than most on here. I want to hear more about Vivian and Lochan so please update :)

Omg please update ,I love how protective he is and even though he's a 'monster' he loves her

Ooh, this is really good :) I love the direction you're taking with this. There's a ton of action that makes me want to keep reading this. It's intense and really makes me want to know what the king is going to do next. You make the relationship between the two main characters so believable! I'm looking forward to your next update :) keep up the awesome writing!

First off, yay! Chapters make me happy! Second, here's what I think. I think kissing is no where near M. It's a light, medium-ish T. So, put as many detailed kisses as you want. If you put roaming hands, that's toeing the line, and if you start putting details like nipples and more dirty things, then it becomes M. Now violence is tricky; you could say they fought and the winner was the last man standing... T (if that). Here is where it starts to be M (I'll use Lochlan): "it was a kind of rush, the feel of the blade running smoothly through the man's chest, almost feeling the other's heart vibrating the sword with its beats. Blood trickled out around the blocked wound, and, savagely ripping his weapon out, Lochlan watched as it exploded with life, red spraying in all directions, watched as the light in the man's eyes died out." That would be an example to hold onto, that is M. Hopefully this helps!

Absolutely love this story, you could definitely publish this. The writing is mesmerizing and so intricate. I was drawn into this world. It's beautiful. Please come out with a next chapter soon! I would love to see what happens, I'm emotionally attached to these characters now!

You should be fine; I've seen more violence in Teen ratings before (see" Bargaining" by proantagonist on AO3). Unless it involves /explicit/ gore or sex scenes, Teen rating is fine. I merely suggest that you warn people about it at the beginning of the chapter, in an author's note or something. Can't wait to read more!

Hi! You write quite well; however "witchcraft" is one word, not two. Keep up the good work!