Wow. There's so much going on here. There's little things in the story worked in so well. I like it.

What are you doing? Oh.. Izumi is the baby azula is waiting in Indulgences? Oh my.. Why is she Mai's? Is something wrong? Oh im sad..

Is this a bloody sequel? Because i don't like.. If this is a sequel of the zucest previous i don't want you to be back.. Sorry but this is totally crazy..

Is this the continuation of Indulgences? Azula leave his baby to Mai and zuko? Tell me not.. Im disapointed..

Oh my sweet god! I love azula with child, and more with zuko's child! Izumi is really amazing character! This really like me! But the worst part its TyZula.. Im sorry but the femlash don't like me.. Can you do it another story with Izumi and Her parents only? Please!

I wish you could continue this with Azula getting to spend more time with Izumi and raising her up as her daughter.

good story.

That's so incredibly sad.

Please continue writing more!

Amazing and dark.

great job. interesting take on "canon".

Please we, make it a full story! This is awesomeeeee, can u write the background story of this at least? That would be great!

Woah! This is brilliant! Can you please write the background story of this one? I mean, how did Ty Lee and Mai react to Azula's pregnancy and Zuko being the father, Izumi's birth, how the decided to make her Mai's daughter. That would be awesome! I really loved this,

I'm utterly impressed, this story is powerful and very well written. Flawless. Izumi being Azula's daughter and Zuko being her father is an incredible twist, a very good one in my opinion. You portrayed the characters perfectly, I could almost feel Azula's pain when she was saying: "I'm looking, I'm looking"; all of them, Zuko, Ty Lee and Mai are on character, no OOC.
Also, the way you described Izumi's resemblance to her mother was perfect. I really enjoyed reading this, it has so much potential and your writing is incredible. This story goes directly to my favourites...
Are you planning on writing a prequel? I'm sure many of us would love to read it. Read Mai, Ty Lee and Zuko's point of view, and how Azula's marriage started to sink since she got pregnant. I'm really curious... I'll definitely read it.
Thank you for sharing this amazing story with us! Have a nice day!

This is amazing! Really, good job, i want to read more c: