*sniffs* That...was...beautiful!

I see hints of twincest but OK. anyways, good story, I enjoyed!

*gasps softly* omfg

OH SHIT

OMFG OMG OMG OMG

OMFG

Oh my I really love this, and maybe I'm reading wayyy to far into your writing, but I love the fact that Hikaru remembered Haruhi so quickly when she was taken, and she is one of the memories that comes back first in the end, it's like she is almost as important as Karou! It's all wonderful, the entire story is wonderful.

I'm so glad that Kaoru still exists! This story was definitely an emotional rollercoaster. :)

Oh dear lord mother freaking of God. My heart just collapsed, then crawled back, then crawled higher in to my throat, then died, then came alive again, then collapsed, died again, then came alive again. Then started working normally. What a nightmare. Dear lord. I about died. I DID die, but luckily I came back.

I don't know what you were trying to pull on me at the beginning of this chapter, where I thought all was lost forever, but you're a brilliant bastard. I'm not even mad about earlier anymore because of this chapter. It was so beautiful.

My favorite line: "And I want him back, you son of a bitch". I read it like five times before moving on. I heart it so bad. Like... I love it when character say that. So intense and heart wrenching.

Great, fantastically good job. *Applause*

Yeah no this just became one of my Absolute Favourites I love this omfg

"- though from who they weren't sure."

should be:

"-though from whom they weren't sure." as "they" are the subject of the sentence. Otherwise, good work.

It's actually "worse for wear" not "worse for wares". Alsio, there are many weird little typos that probably just bother me alone... sorry.
But this plot is pretty unique, and I like the idea.

WHAT THE GOD FREAKING DAMMIT?! NO! NO! WE WERE SO CLOSE, SO FREAKING FLIPPING F'ING CLOSE. I SAW IT. THEY SAW IT. YOU SAW IT. EVERYONE SAW IT. I SAW KAORU THROUGH HIKARU's EYES. WHAT IS THE MATTER WITH YOU?! *breaks down* WHY...? *starts sobbing*

Oh my god. This chapter was intense from the beginning to the end. Especially the end. Oh my god. My heart was literally pounding as my eyes darted so fast across the screen. I read every sentence twice to make sure I didn't miss anything.

Now I can't stop reading this. I need to know what the hell that sick twisted corrupted man just did to my baby. Hikaru! NOOOOO! *cries and pets house cat*

YOU BETTER FIX THIS. You fix this and bring Hikaru back all his friends. That moment when Hika and Haruhi's hands almost touched made me cry, because he ALMOST had her... ALMOST... TT Q.Q T.T *cries harder*

I pulled all my hair out, I screamed, I cried, and my laptop has the biggest hold through it. You fix this author, you fix this as fast as you can.

*kicks laptop and walks away*

Oh! Interesting

NO WHAT

NO

WHAT

NO

I DON'T

WHAT

NO

HARUHI RAN

HE GOT THE FILE

THEY'RE ALL REAL

WHAT

WHY THIS

NO

THIS IS NOT OKAY

THIS IS NEVER OKAY

NO ON GAVE YOU PERMISSION TO SO BRUTALLY MURDER ME LIKE THIS

HOW DARE YOU

HOW /DARE/ YOU

THE FEELS

THEY HURT

SO MUCH