| Reviews for Drabble Caboodle |
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  Guest chapter 9 . 8/22 I really really really really liked this chapter, however I do have a few suggestions, so I on the 13th line break you say "Somehow he got her to tell about..." I think you can improve that by replacing tell with talk, and on the 14th line break its "plotting v.s. pantsing, you accidentally wrote plotting v.s. pansing. On the 15th line break you wrote "how much more is to it..." I think you could improve it by saying how much more there is to wrighting. On the 16th line break I think you could specify that she asked about his major. On line break 23 you said "half an ten minutes latter" I'm fairly certain you intended it to be half an hour and ten minutes latter. On line break 40, you said "pushing her hair around constantly, I think you could replace the word pushing with the word adjusting. When natsu asked for hydrogen dioxide, well that would kill him, hydrogen dioxide is H2O2 because the di in dioxide means two, water is H2O which is hydrogen monoxide because mon means one. Hydrogen dioxide is also known as hydrogen peroxide, that's in line break 80 by the way. OK last one, in line break 99 you say "and I don't anyone that talks about Grey's cool girlfriend..." I think you might have wanted to say I don't want anyone... Anyway that's it, thank you for wrighting this, I really enjoyed it. And I love the way you structured your wrighting. I think you have a lot of potential. Take care. |
 DemiWizard17 chapter 11 . 6/16 Dumbass Dork |
| DemiWizard17 chapter 9 . 6/16 These puns were Au! |
| DemiWizard17 chapter 1 . 6/15 I got gryff and slyth on pottermore still dont know how that happened |
| kaylajmoss chapter 9 . 9/11/2019 I just love this chapter so much! I keep coming back to it to read again. thanks for writing! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 11/21/2018 I want chapter 11 to be a whole story |
| SapphiRubyCrys chapter 12 . 3/30/2018 Oh God I think my heart just melted into a puddle |
| SapphiRubyCrys chapter 8 . 3/30/2018 Awww so adorable |
| Yed01 chapter 4 . 2/7/2018 I kinda which dames dig dorks become a series |
| AseCat chapter 12 . 12/14/2017 awwww omg it's So Sweet! I almost cried at the end TT! Ahhh so beautiful...! your fics are all amazing i love them |
| AseCat chapter 11 . 12/14/2017 HAHAHA Omg that was fun! I love the enemies to lovers fanfics so that was Amazing! so hilarious! xD |
| AseCat chapter 9 . 12/14/2017 Waaaah that was so cute! And yes Lucy Natsu is definitely the most attractive guy in the whole universe. But seriously can he be my teacher please i suck at chemistry! i kind of didn't understand half the puns xD and SOUL EATER! YAY! i love that anime |
| AseCat chapter 8 . 12/14/2017 AHHH THAT WAS SO CUTE OMG! i love it! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/3/2017 Yay an update! Thank you soooo much and I love your writing! |
| Atlancia chapter 12 . 11/26/2017 Hello Ry :-) This drabble was super cute, just like all of yours! And I really love your writing (I can't say it often enough), especially your conversations, they're always so in character, and so well-paced, and just perfect. I hope you keep having fun writing and sharing it with us! Have a great day! Anna |
