I really love this fic! PLEASE UPDATE.

This was an awesome read and I'm glad I had a chance to spend some time with it. Thank you for sharing this.

I liked the chapter!

After two years, a cliffhanger.

Congratulations commander, you just elevated yourself to 'love interest' for the sleepy yandere. Just became the Naruto to her Hinata. Nothing will go wrong here, nooo sir...

But i am curious as to what the offspring between a planet and the commander will be.

"IA IA CONSTRUCTION COMPLETE"

I couldn't help my laughter. ARM_CONSUB_01 is love. Every time I think about this line...

I'm glad to see another update after so long. Thank you.

I have no idea what's going on, but I like it!

10. Extraction 06 B and 11. Extraction 07 [Interlude] are the exact same chapter meaning you are missing Extraction 06 B.

ha ha, love the story my friend. also can you make a crossover of familiar of zero with total annihilation with the arm commander, and not core; because they're asshole to everyone.

And now I kinda wanna see an Arm Commander vs Macross fic. Thanks for the chapter!

Seeing this story updated makes me extremely happy!

The protagonist realising that he has more in common with Planet than with any human is brilliantly done. The dream section was interesting and returning to the point at the end worked well.

The conversation about him not wanting to destroy the Isles of the Deep was really good and the Gaian commander's stance great too.

I liked the technical details of the submarines, particularly how the mesh of cybernetic and biological made for the best defence.

The stuff about the loss of culture in the pursuit of war is truly fascinating and probably my favourite part of this chapter. Not sure how well it meshes with him having having a close enough understanding to make quite a few cultural reference jokes in earlier chapters though.

I don't particularly like the opening. It feels like it's trying to be funny (and somewhat fetishistic), but hitting someone who appears to be having a seizure just feels too nasty for slapstick for me. And if they are reacting according to a plan, why risk her fingers for his tongue? (Particularly given that you definitely shouldn't stick anything into the mouth of someone having a seizure.)

The end of the chapter is excellent. The one sentence paragraph pacing really works for an awesome dénouement.

Welcome back, Commander.

Ah the trans-human realisation.
Good chapter Bpen

Even though parts of this can be very confusing, I really want to see what you had planned for this. It should be interesting to see where you take it. And also interesting is why he hasn't created any Air or Space assets.

Oh goddam you absolutely BRILLIANT motherfucker. Words cannot describe how impressed i am at your planning skillz.