I actually like that there was very little dialogue. This chapter was very suspenseful indeed, and I wonder who died. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one, Angel! :)

Can't wait for the next chapter

Amazing! Cant wait for more!

I love this! I love this so much! I love how you write Randy's character! He's so knowledgeable, so mysterious, and so sexy! aah! And I noticed how you described Randy eying her up and down like a viper stalkin' it's prey... heh, I see what you did there, but very nice!

I can't wait to see how everything goes down!

This is only just the beginning. Tbh though, I really do hope this comes out as a long and lengthy story because I am enjoying it so much, and I can tell you are too. Update soon, and lovely chapter of course. :)

Hey guys,
Here's a sneak peak of the RT quote that will be used/cited in chapter 6!
"In the end none of it matters: the size of our family, how much we have, or who we count as friends. In the end we all die alone. It's not death I fear, it's dying here."
~ Ranse Truman, "A Lonely Place to Die", The Suffering
Ciao now!
~ Angel 'welivexnbreathewords'

Love it! Can't wait for more! Great job (:

I can't wait till the poetry part of this story. It's going to be awesome, that being said, I hope you can come up with something! And update soon, because this story leaves me at the edge of my seat wondering what's going to happen next. :D

LMAO! Randy is going to scare Kelly to death. This story so far by what you wrote is giving me chills, and it's dark. Definitely faving this, Angie. You're doing such a nice job in this suspense genre.

Heh, Kelly is in for it now. :D I love Randy's appearance at the end. He is so smug here, I love it. A very nice chapter 2, onto the 3rd chapter... :D

I love the way you described Linden Pines. It really sets the mood of the story, a really, really dark atmosphere, and of course, the mystery as to who or what kill Randy's dad is suspenseful. I'll get onto reading the rest of these chapters. :) Nice start.

ooh. this is really good. very dark & suspenseful. i hope you continue updating.
:)

I'm glad that we had some peak in the supernatural stuff going on in here. Here's to hoping that you'll dive more into that & to what drove Vince & the COs, into locking patients up in solitary! :D I love the suspense here, and how it's so... dark. Keep it coming!

Ooh, now this is getting interesting. I think learning about The Institute's history certainly makes this story a lil darker, I like it. :D Keep it going, Angie!

I'm loving this! So intriguing! Great job!