THG FEELS! This reminds me of how I felt reading the book!

Hey, this is great! Nicely ic and a good transition to a AU "book 2". Continue? Please?

The language and metaphor you use in this piece borders on lyrical, kind of like a poem, powerful and beautiful at the same time. Wonderful work, and a fascinating character study as well.

That was heavy with a light at the end of the tunnel.

I liked that she is the one that search for Peeta comfort and realizes that she cant be without him

Ohnwow! So true to the characters. Love it!

How i wish dr. Aurelius was there for the both of them after the first games. Poor Prim. Kudos!

This is great. I loved it. I like stories about how messed up the characters have become after their horrors and not get mushy-lovey-dovey.
Ofcours now I want to know how it might go on, but I understand the beauty of leaving off where you did.
Thanks for this.

"..and when she is too tired to fight her own demons, he picks up the sword." I absolutely love that line. This was perfect.

I don't like this very much. It's too dramatic you know?

*Stunned silence* That was very good. I love the note of hope it ended on. Good job!

I like this piece. It's very believable. I don't doubt that Katniss could develop an eating disorder or try to hurt herself simply to feel alive again. And I especially like her explaining herself to Peeta regarding the romance in the first Games. You wrote what should have happened.