And how did they find him and get the coordinates to his island? It seems he has even more betrayers to deal with.

bonne fic!

please continue story soon?

Most of the Malfoy's fortune came from the Black ? So... You are telling me that the Black's family which was incredibly wealthy decided to let a member of its house marry a pauper and then transfer insane amount of money to said pauper ? Yeah, right...
Same with Harry ruining most of the darker families, that's just plain unbelievable that most of the wealthy families of magical britain would have outstanding debts to the same person and that said debts would be high enough to ruin them all. I don't know who first thought of this "brilliant" idea of having Harry just snapping his fingers and suddently all death eaters are now poor but it's a pretty lazy writing and a retarded plot twist.

Good one

Nice.

Sorry I tried but I can't see the resemblance between Dumbledore and Hitler. Just because both are charismatic they are the same ? Like litteraly thousands of others people, are they all like Hitler in your opinion too ? That's pretty stupid.
At best you can say that both of them pretended to defend a higher cause but so is the case of almost every politician so... Nope sorry I really don't see it.

I like it. I get PO'd at the various incarnations of Harry who finally get fed up and leave, only to consent to being dragged back to fight Voldemort. Your Harry has taken care of all Horcruxes except Nagini, and Snape can do that on one of his little spying jaunts. Better still, let Ron do it. He's always whining about how Harry gets everything; he also seems to think he has played equal roles in Harry's "adventures." I say, let him have a small slice of what Harry has repeatedly faced. He can whack Nagini while the others battle Voldemort. Voila! Problem solved.

I never cease to find it both amusing and irritating that the supposed greatest wizard alive drags two teenagers, an immature professor who hates Harry and can't stop insulting him, and a screeching harridan on his "missions of diplomacy" to try and get Harry to return. What does he think they can do? Moody I can understand, as Harry seems to have at least respected him at one point. The others are useless and annoying; they only serve to remind Harry of their betrayals and torments and make Dumbledore look foolish.

I'm glad your Harry has the sense to send them back home and make a report to whomever is apparently in charge of his security. Go, Harry! Thanks for sharing your fun and intelligent story.

forgotten start

more needs to come

That's it?

bonne fic!

pretty fun one-shot. go harry!

great story

EXCELLENT
ROCK ON

i liked the story, and your longer treatment as well.