I suddenly started thinking. If the carpet can lift four people without any problems, why couldn't it lift the cabinet?

They've known each other for like two days, but they kind of sound as though they've been lying for weeks.

Well if you ask me. I for one think you did pretty well on this story as a whole. it's one of the best Kingdom Hearts Stories I've seen.

I think the title of this chapter is appropriate for the First Day of the Keys to the Kingdom Series.

So far this is turning out well.

Aaaand there’s my favorite line in the whole movie. “Jafar. Jafar. He’s our man. If he can’t do it GREAT!”
Story favorited.

Fourth wall broken: check. Voice of the late Robin Williams running through my head: check. Interest in story: check.

This was amazing. Azlyn and Telary are great OCs. I really liked all the twists you did on the main story. Favorited. Looking forward to reading the sequel, but it will be odd if you skip Chain of Memories...

Didn't they already introduce each other?
Other than that I love the story.

Hello hello! Started reading this pretty late - in terms of the fic being complete at this point, and the literal time (2:30 AM here lol) but I didn't want to go to bed or advance without leaving a review! A friend recommended this to me since she and I are always on the hunt for good OC stories, and I will say, this was a promising start!

I know it might be a little late for concrit, but I'll be honest and say that the first half or so of this fic was me just skimming - while, as a story, it's nice to include Sora's background info/canon happenings to tie in, as a reader who's a fan of the series (as is most of your audience), it was a little tedious to get through, since there wasn't any new information, you know?

But once I got past all that and got to Telary and Azlyn (great original names btw!) I was hooked. You gave them pretty interesting roles that you don't often see with OCs (aka they're not mega-light-hikari-angel keyblade wielders), which was really refreshing! I don't know too much about them yet or what you plan on doing with them in the story, but I like their dynamic a lot so far and they seem to have fun personalities (Tel is a doll omg).

So, yeah, looking forward to reading more of this soon!

Excellent rendition of the Kingdom Hearts universe. I hope I enjoy the sequel just as much. Would recommend this for any KH fan.

Very good story. I hope to catch up to your sequel soon.

I am surprised this story has only gotten 32 reviews! It is a phenomenally crafted story! I can't wait to continue on reading this, and eventually make it to the sequel!

Ohhh my gosh, I can't believe it's actually over! Tears are threatening to fall, both sad and happy.

I only noticed it just now, but a handful of OCs tend to pull the focus from canon characters. Not only that, in certain cases the canon storyline is sometimes downplayed in favor for an original plot. Not that it's bad, but well, that's just my personal preference to stick close to canon. All in all, congratulations! I believe you achieved what you were aiming for.

Since the sequel would be released at the end of November (or later), I'm glad to say I'm looking forward to it! Exams are over by then, so that's a bonus for me, haha.

Glad to be supporting,
B.

I feel amazing...

I finished reading a story on Fanfiction that had so much Heart (no pun intended) that it actually made me cry at the end. I love this story so much, and I'm glad it's going to continue. I just can't describe my current feeling... It's all warm and stuff... It brings tears to my eyes! Freaking tears!

Oh man, oh man...

I don't think I'll be able to play Kingdom Hearts III when it comes out without thinking about Azlyn and Telary in Donald and Goofy's place...

Now, if you'll pardon me, I gotta spend my entire weekend playing Kingdom Hearts...

Thanks. I really needed some encouragement to write...
Artisan out!