First of all, let me tell you that this one of the best RWBY fanfics I have ever read! It very deeply examines the racism in Remnant which plays a crucial role in the story. Also, uhhhhh! Izaak and Yang! You are killing me with them right now! They need to get together soon, and stop tip toeing around each other! All the OCs are really well done, and I now wish they existed in the show. The only issue I have are the occasional spelling mistakes, which thankfully don’t affect the story too much, though try to keep a lookout because if the spelling mistake is in a really special scene, it can kinda take the mood away. However, overall, good job, and I can’t wait for your next update! Izaak x Yang forever!

Well, I'd say THAT was a hint at Neil's past delivered by Mercury's thoughts and actions.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Quite possibly the best fanfic I've ever read. The work you put into your oc's is one of my favorite parts. Please keep up the good work.

good chapter nice devoplement all around also what did you do to Ruby

I'm a little late to the party and have no idea if this fic is still ongoing, but I'm still curious to see Sage and Scarlet will be joining Sun and Neptune beyond just getting knocked out during the Vytal Festival Tournament.

good chapter the stuff with your OCs were good as always also more shipping for Pairing throne

Good chapter I like how you're setting up the plots and relationships with everyone nice to see that this fic is back also Volume 7 stuff is here p.s Ace ops?

I swear, every time you hear the phrase 'Is a matter of national security' you know blood will be spilled.
Excellent chapter and pacing as always.

On a side note, I was wondering what type of aircraft is the one called 'the fat snake', I pictured a B-70 Valkyrie for it's speed and lifting capability, but I could be wrong.

I know Garm is supposed to be Izaaks inner demon / beast but I really want one cause that would be awesome (and pretty terrifying at first). But I'd finally have someone who could understand all of my shitty jokes.

So, Jaune now can go all out, becoming a senator and start taunting his enemies saying "Nanomachines, son"?

Great chapter as always, looking forward to the next one!

well that a nice chapter also I hope to see more

Brave Bird? Sounds like the Pokemon Move judging by the description lol, i like it

first this story somthing else seconed good delovment all around third this needs a tv tropes page

"Next chapter I plan on it being Jaune and Izaak-centered since I pretty much left their storylines on cliffhangers the last chapter"

Yes you totalky did !

So who are the top 10 strongest characters in your story and where do the main characters rank at compared to them?