Think the ending could have been better felt you rushed it to finis it bust I over the fiction and did laugh when Elliot used the key while Liv is wearing strap on and Alex is naked ( I actually did it’s to my daughter and her girlfriend I’m deaf and I knocked her bedroom door but being deaf did realise. Yes was embarrassed but she did shout get out straight away ) I don’t know why 1. Liv didn’t shout get out or 2. Why Elliot just stood watching and but looking at then by which all the others were in yeah Eliot you’ve always had Liv’ !

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This is fantastic I don’t know how I issued it before.
It’s beautifully written with confusion, anger and empathy.
I now it’s already cmpleted but I would love Olivia to make Love to Alex slowly so she orgasms over and but gently. Or with Alex tied and blindfolded to prove it dosen’t need to be rough to be amazing tease her by she begs ;o)

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I know you wrote this years ago, but please make another like this with Liv and Alex! It was great

Re read this and I'm just blown away-again! Would love for you to write more stories for this pairing. I'll continue to re read all your A/O stories.

That was hot story! I was wondered is there sequel to this story?

"You didn't"...i love this exchange.

Yes...go Liv...

Aw yeah...love it...go Olivia...

Oh, wow...damn, Alex!

Good for Olivia for turning away...let Alex be hurt for a little while and finally admit her feelings.

Oh, Elliot will definitely notice the sweatshirt! I just know it!

awww.

Happy ending...yay! Loved this story! Thank you for sharing!

That was great story, got sequel in works? That story was hot! now I need is a cold shower!

Great story...I'm sad to see it end. I don't often subscribe to stories but did with this story because it was so engrossing.

Love it! Thank u