Really good story, just the big part that makes no sense, is why didn't they go find hiro once his "goodbyes" started? I mean wouldn't they think somethings up?

your fanfiction SUCKS! this was terrible and it sucks it stinks to see hiro lied down like that with a gun in his hands and a bullet on his head I couldn't take it anymore Please don't do this anymore please

Great job! Made me almost cry.

But just one thing- why didn't anyone run up to comfort Hiro as soon as they saw half of it? I mean, sure, they would've been shocked, but at least one person could've went up to comfort him.

But still, Great Story!

THIS IS AWESOME PLZ MAKE ONE WHERE THEY ALL FIND THE BULLIES AND THE BULLIES FIND OUT HIRO KILLED HIMSELF

Great story, sad and tragic but well written and shows wat a smile can hide

An absolutely amazing story! You have the ability to pull my heartstrings. I was on the brink of crying when Hiro committed suicide. This is a story for those who bully people and for the people who observe without taking action. I myself have been bullied, although psychologically, not physically, I do not believe anyone who hasn't been bullied before will fully comprehend the feeling of sadness and helpnessless of being a bully victim. Sorry for rambling so much, bullying is just a big topic for me. Anyways, loved your story. You have an extraordinary gift, treasure it!

-AC

This is so sad! I will always remember this. Rest In Peace Amanda.

May Amanda rest in peace

I have died on the inside

It's so sad!

oh my... this made me cry sooooo bad...

NO BABY SMOL BEAN

Chill young

As soon as i got to the rape bit im like. Wait is this supposed to be another version of amanda todd!? So i kept reading now im like, KNEW IT!

gonna go cry now ...love your story dude

I'm crying waterfalls! (TT~TT)