Please keep going this is amazing

I'm not sure if this fic is actually finished but the content that is available so far is good. Looking forward to new chapters if this ever gets updated.

I'm now convinced that Flynn is the Storybrooke version of Batman...but on a low-budget...and with a frying pan instead of a batarang as a weapon.

Who knew Lily was so versatile like Barbie. One day she's a kidnapper. Tomorrow she's an escort. Today she's a midwife. She comes with her own work clothes and accessories as well. "Wow! I want a Lily too!"

So Emma's special move against Regina could be "Cat-in-Heat" Magic...that's a little sexual harassy, but I guess...if that's the way she gets that bigger fam she always wanted.

I like how there's a random plug of the 2015 Nissan Rogue in chapter 13.

I'm in chapter 12 of this story and seriously...Emma is starting to sound like a broken record about Regina having to prove herself. And then she tells Regina that she "can't read minds" yet she's over here making vague statements and leaving questions open-ended as well. It makes me truly wonder why people in these vague relationship set-ups cheat in the first place. At this point, if Regina were to get involved with someone else again while Emma leisurely waits to be wooed by Regina, it wouldn't even come as a surprise.

The level of drama in this story...I can almost feel myself there, caught with the character's distressed emotions. I dislike negative, tense emotions, but I like how this story has been flowing so far. Great writing.

"You said you didn't want her to tell me until the paternity was found out. On Maury that means whose the dad!" Henry glared at his brunette mother.

LOL!

...Regina is being a dig bick.

Love it

Love the story

Please please come back and update this and first impressions they are your best fics and it would be so good if they got a happy ending.

please update soon tys

All your stories follow a certain pattern where Regina is a huge asshole and Emma is pathetic. In the end Emma has to forgive Regina for all her mistakes because she either has dick or she is Emma's baby mama.