I loved how well you wrote this and i cant wait to see how the characters grow in the next story. Well done! And do you have any pointers for writing such long stories? I'm busy with my 1st Frozen long story, but my writing style changes too much and then i get discouraged

Oh, this is another one of your great stories. I can't wait to read the rest of it. Thanks again!

This is an adorable, charming, and beautifully-executed little story, and I loved it. A lot.
- - Your presentation of the characters was spot-on.
- - The pace of the story was just right.
- - Your handling of the Mother Tongue was a real pleasure (when the technical aspects of a story are smooth enough that the reader doesn't notice them, you've done your job).
- - You added a lot of little details that gave it depth and realism.

Just lovely.

This goes into Favorites.

Well, THAT was a necessary conversation. I'm sure they'll go into more detail later, but it was a really good start.

This is being quite the enjoyable little tale. I'm grinning over Kristoff's constant state of discomfiture.

This was an adorable story, and was fun to read. I look forward to reading the sequel.

This is lovely! Very true to the characters and written wonderfully. While I enjoy the bond between the sisters and the relationship between Kristoff and Anna, as a monarchist, I am quite fond of how you've written Elsa as a queen and how she handles the duties of a monarch. She's got it all figured out. Very noble of her. Great stuff! Huge enjoyment to read.

Your so good at writing the characters! Great job!
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Ahh, I didn't realise this chapter was out! Sorry for not reviewing! Anyway, I haven't got much time (exams are so close and it's all feeling real now!) anyway, though, I loved the AnnaXKristoff interaction at the start of the chapter - it made a really nice extension to the film clip. I also liked how Anna immediately assumed that Kristoff would have somewhere to keep his sled - I guess being royalty means it wouldn't occur to her that his sled would be kept outside, considering that such a thing would never happen in her family, with as much money as they have. I also enjoyed the little skating scene at the end; it never occurred to me that Elsa probably would have been terrified that no one would turn up!
Thanks for the story!

I read all this at night yesterday and wow it really brought me back into the world of fanfic in a good way :) I love this, I don't want it to end but I think you will have left the ending in a good conclusion based off your writing style now.

I really enjoy the Kristoff thoughts and Elsa thoughts, Anna is playful as ever, but it's cute seeing everyone with their doubts while they get to know each other!

Charming and very well written. This is one of the better ones I've read about the time immediately after the Thaw. All those "unglamorous" details that never made it to the big screen are actually really interesting to me, and this time frame of the movie is a favorite Fic setting for me: the awkwardness and adorableness of Kristoff and Anna getting to know each other now that the purpose-driven, adrenaline-fueled quest is through, and of course, the relief of frustration and elation the sisters must feel being together again. It's such a happy, yet hectic time in the lives of the characters, and you captured the emotions everyone must be feeling perfectly. It irks me to no end that great stories like yours only get 30-some reviews. I've read a lot of fanfic, and a lot of Frozen fanfic in particular, and it never ceases to amaze me that most cliche poorly written pieces of garbage get tons of reviews. I don't get this site sometimes. Anyway, good job. Did not mean to go off on a tangent like that. If you end up writing a sequel to this (which I think you mentioned you might do), I would definitely check it out!

That was absolutely beautiful :)

This was a great story. I did a lovely job of filling in the blanks that the movie left open. I loved Elsa's speech to the people, very well written. You managed to capture the true nature of the characters throughout the story. Well done!

That. Was. AMAZING! I absolutely adored every part of it, seriously. So many Frozen fics are filled with danger and peril, I really enjoyed finding one a bit closer to the source material. I ultra-mega-super hope you choose to continue, because I'd love to read more! :3

Bravo. Bravo. BFM. The awkwardness between Anna and Kristoff - and Elsa's nerves – are beautifully written, your original dialogue is naturally (and seemingly effortlessly) 'in voice' with the film's dialogue and, just generally, the whole 15 chapters have been a triumph. Your use of punctuation to control the pacing and tone, is especially good. Too few writers understand the power of the dash or semi-colon. I am beyond pleased that Frozen inspired you to write for again, and that I found your story. Please keep writing - here or elsewhere - you owe it to yourself and the wider world. Congratulations again.