I wonder what Alpha Trion is in this. I’m just a bit curious, that’s all.

Moar pls?

Awesome story! I like this twist of the usual stuff

i love this fanfic i wish you would continue it!

Wow, this is a unique twist of fantasy in this fandom, at least that I know of. I really love this.

You know what would be hilarious? Starscream the pissed off phoenix, accidentally-on-purpose saboteur of Megatron. Anyway, interesting story!

I was rereading this story and remembered how much I loved this story. I hope you update or if you don't that's okay. Maybe it's my Supernatural side talking, but it would be really cool if there were angels. Cool story

Primus I hope you continue this. This is a great story, I actually love it so much that a friend of mine and I are doing an rp based on it.

Poor jazz got to feel for that poor Bot, now can a fairy tale a moral as a mate I wonder? Well I hear in other fairy tales of old that sometime they do but the the mortal is change into becoming a fae as well so looking forwards to what you'll do :3

Well okay. Was not expecting that.

Oops. I suppose the whole "I only opened the door for a second" excuse won't do much... It works when talking about cats! Oh, wow. I'm giggling at someone's death. That's not at all psychopathic. (Total sarcasm there) Who's gonna be in more trouble? Jazz or the twins.

So what's hound going to do with Smokescreen? Hopefully he can help with the whole being poisoned part. Hey! Wait a minute. If Smokey's already being rescued, doesn't that mean Wheeljack's promise is null and he doesn't get a body? Uh, don't tell him I said that.

So you're going to update faster this time, right? Well I shouldn't push, because I've got a dozen story ideas only half written.

Oh! Cool how you introduced Hound and Trailbreaker!
And loved Wheeljack's and Ratchet's interaction xD
Jazz is soo dead right now...
Awesome chapter!

Wow. Just...fabulous work! The tension and all the emotions I could feel while writing this...just amazing! And I love how Wheeljack is the one they're all scared of! Love this chapter!

Another great and suspenseful chapter! Keep up the awesome work! :)

Oh. My. God. This chapter! So intense! Love it!
And you made Ratchet and Wheeljack very cool! Going to be awesome to see more of them!