I hope that you are going to do another chapter of this. I'm dying to know what happens next!

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS IS SOMETHING DIFFERENT AND I LOVE IT AND I LOVE THE LACK OF INNOCENCE AND VIOLENCE YOU BRING INTO THE BH6 WORLD. YOU WRITE VERY WELL AND EVEN WITH THE WORLD ALTERED AS WELL AS HIRO AND TADASHI YOU MANAGE TO PORTRAY THEM VERY WELL WHILE KEEPING THEM WITH THEIR TYPICAL CHARACTERISTICS AND PERSONALITITES

ooh Tadashi, you're changing his world just by being there loved the new chapter, and until another one, later and have fun writing :)

Great work so far. Im totally trapped by the story. Whats Hiro? Is he human? Is he possessed? Is he some kind of supernatural creature? I cant wait to know. And Tadashi is so cute… Panda briefs? That was so childish I dont know if I find it embarrassing or incredible awesome. Loved the dark streak of Hiro. I hope you write more soon.

Wow! That was exciting! It was impressive how you transferred the scene from the movie into your story. I loved the line Tadashi said about Hiro being his little brother. : )
You're really good at writing suspense. You really know how to keep people in suspense during this spooky and scary scenes!
It's really cool so far. I can't wait to see where this story goes!

This story sounds interesting! I always like the darker, anti-hero theme, and your writing is amazing. Please keep up the awesome writing!

More please!

Hey this story is amazing! Pls pls pls keep going its sooooooo goooood

O.O?

Love it xD

Extremely well written