I love this fic more about this couple soon please

Now, that's a good reason for revenge! Well thought of!

I love how this story progresses with their feelings slowly growing for each other, rather than suddenly appearing out of the blue like in other fics. It makes sense here that they see something special in the other through their talks and the time they spend together, even in the short time together.

It's very lovely and I'm excited to read on.

amazing story. thank you!

wow!
this was amazing. I enjoied every word

Very well done.

Bravo! Bravo! I read this entire story in two days and It is definitely my favorite fanfiction by far, it's so good that it doesn't even seem like a fanfaction, it seems like i'm reading an actual book. I've also read your fanfiction "The Hatter's Shoppe" and it's also great.

Loved your story. Very interesting take on it.

What a fabulous story! I hated to see it end, though it ended so well. The details and the action came together in a well written package. Thank you, so much, for writing.
I look forward to more from you.
Until then, happy writing!

ASDFGHJKL IM DYING THIS STORY IS AMAZING!

Truly marvelous!

A lovely end for your wonderful story. It was very good idea Neverland to be an ordinary island from now on. Wendy and James will stay together, a family, traveling the seas. Thanks for your story!

Awww. Loved it!

What an exciting chapter! Pan has lost whatever sense he had, he has lost his inner child. I loved the way Wendy declared her love for Hook and his own for her. The sorrow of Smee sensing this is near the end was sad. Wendy surprised me with her "don't believe". So Pan is gone. Neverland will cease to exist? Will they be able to leave now?Can't wait for the epilogue.

Whoaaaaaaaaa!