Your doing a wonderful job on your story, so dont worry about that. Focus on getting well. Good luck with your theropy. Ari

Harry should face Moldy in the grave yard. It would make it fair.

good thing in my story the potters will listen that gay old fool and not follow his plans and they will not abonded one of their kids

you should end it in the graveyard if your health gets bad again I would hate to see another abonded story

Can you make harry and draco animagus also blessed by two titans know as kronos and Helios

Great fanfic! UPDATE!

I really love this fanfic and was wondering if you are going to continue? I really hope you do because I really enjoy reading it and would like to find out what happens next. :)

That escalated uncomfortably quick... Also isn't Lily still technically married to James because I don't remember they're being a mention of her and James getting a divorce

really well written book

I hope your health feels better and a "Merry Christmas!".

Hello, I hope your health is better. Do you think to write a sequel because I really like your story

in the graveyard

I would say that it would be great if you could have Harry and Alex beat Voldemort in the grave yard though Draco would be there also because Harry has a twin bond and it pulls him there? Maybe in the graveyard Alex could show his element power? Then Harry, Draco, and Alex could unlock a combined element power to defeat him? Also could Alex go to Salem once his element power is there and take a special set of classes so that he can be in the same year as the twins maybe? Idk I have a lot more ideas so just message me maybe or something or email me I don’t really know how messaging works/or if it exists on here.

I hope your health returns and your muse reappears. I enjoy your writings

They story is interesting if a bit spastic in it's delivery. Some slight Grammer and tense issues but over all im interested.