PLEASE continue! This story is painful to read but onl y because it is written so good! Rape is a terrible obnoxious thing and should never happen!
Please continue your story tho because I want to see what happens next with Lorcisse

So if yippy ever decide to come back to this, I think this needs to defintely be continued

I Love the bond Lola and Francis have in General. They are a great pair and she is my favorite character! :'D Wish they were a couple

I hope you continue this!

So sad

I hope you haven't given up on this!

I wish you'd have written more : it's absolutely well written and it makes you want to read more !

Such a great story, please continue, Lola and Narcisse are the best couple

Loved your story hope there is more chapters

I hope you update soon! I love this story so far!

While I'm glad to see more Lola/Narcisse fics, I'm rather wary about fic plots that use rape as a narrative. I wasn't a huge fan of it when they did it to Mary in the show. Rape is a very sensitive thing and it's used too often in fiction as a narrative tool too often for the male to react in some heroic and protective manner. I would like to see you take it in a different direction, at least to focus less on the idea of Narcisse going on a rampage to "fix" it (although it should be considered how killing the perpetrator would make it all better or would even help).

This is just my personal opinion and the feedback I'm offering you as a writer. I just hope you learn and grow and enjoy your time writing the fic. Good luck.

Hi, love this story and I absoultly adore lola x Narcisse. I'm just wondering have you considered writing a smut for the pairing? Because do would love one :)

Omg love this story, hope you make more chapters 3

Amazing story keep it up :)

This story is AMAZING! Definitely one of my favorites ! :D
I can't wait to read more, please update soon :D