This story is so awesome !

I have headaches and nose bleeds from trying to make sense of this story the idea is good don't get me wrong there's potential uu just need to work on ur world building, gramma, spelling and character development.. theres just so many gramma and miss spelling errors that I end up correcting them in my head as I read and that can get irritating quickly.. And don't get me started on the whole whirlpool nation mess..

A great story

Hey mr/mrs author. I know you will most likely not read this but I just wanted to write it nonetheless. You had a very good idea with this fic. However, you should really focus on how you write dialogue. People just say too much info. Also you should break long sentences with some descriptions of characters their mimics, their reactions etc.

That was fricking amazing I love it so much definitely earned yourself a new follower! Also pls make a sequel maybe about ”bellastora”?

Awesome story man keep up the awesomeness of writing awesome stories.

seriously it's heir not hair

Guns ruin story's like this can't read

Question why did u make them wear nazi uniforms. You couldn't have done Japanese

So random benders don't deserve to die for their ancestors' sin but the current avatar does? What kind of logic is that? If he was consistent he'd be trying to figure out a way to drag the guilty guys soul back to the real world so they could punish him.

What a copout. The summary and first chapter gave a strong impression of a revenge fic.

A praise worthy story with a great beginning, a stable plot and a lovely end!
It was a smooth ride from start to finish, really loved the plot
Op Naruto is my guilty pleasure.
Perhaps the names of the vehicles were a bit confusing for an average reader like me but I was still able to fill the gaps with my imaginations. Though a bit too much on the descriptions...
The dynamic was great and the plot twists were also good.
All in all a story I enjoyed for a quick read. Nothing too epic or amazing but a simple read of Naruto overpowering and dominating his enemies!

This was a successful story. Congratulations on being awesome enough to start a great story, staying with it, and finishing said story. Hope you enjoy life.

Holy fuck! This was so good! The ending was so satisfying. I love the avatar gang, but killing them off was genius! Hahaha, Rava and vaatu died, brutally. Is it wrong that I was cheering at the deaths (expect zuko. It would have been better if Iroh killed him himself. Death by remote detonated heart seemed boring ta me). I was searching for OP naruto in the avatar world fanfics, but this was gold! I like you, your writing is good, very dedicated to the character's personality, very expressive (granted i skipped out on the explanations on the damn tech. It was a good idea to describe them but it was too much for me to remember what was what)

Holy shit. I LOVE IT! Yeah, the avatars were assholes, so I kinda want aang to either realize the avatars aren't perfect and that the world shouldn't be so dependent on him and basically make peace with the uzumaki, or die, ending the air nomads and the avatar cycle.