Those yang like sora?

Grammar Nazi?

great work and I see you kept the kingdom hearts three :)

this is good update soon

And you can't say that he went to castle oblivion because of your summary won't add up with the story.

I'm not trying to capsize your flow of the story but you and I know that you just time skip on info sora didn't know anything about before he got to master Yen Sid. There is also the reason he has more power to fight nobodies because if he was fight them before that event he would most likely lose. Not saying to a bad move, but just think of actually letting sora use his special moves like (Strike Raid, Sonic blade, Brave shot, and Ars Arcanum) because he knows them already.

It was alright I guess, it's just I don't know why you only have Sora using spells like Fira and Cura instead of Firaga and Curaga wouldn't that be more useful and I'm pretty sure Sora realizes that there are more than one Guard Armor because he did take on even just the pieces in the Olympus Coliseum.

I liked the story but yeah I don't know it's just that I've seen so many SoraxRuby not that I hate that coupling it's just I wish there were moments between the other members of team RWBY but that's just me besides that nice job better than a certain other story that's trying to turn Sora into something he is not; like a tragic hero. But anyways like I said nice job.

Just a suggestion have Blake not trust Sora with her don't have too much shipping.

I don't want this to be shipping. There is too much of it.

Remnant is the world, Vale is the Kingdom

kool story here Ruby/Sora please I believe you would o both of them justice Kairi/sora is way over done I don't mind other pairings as much just no slash of any sort, but its you story

good job here, its written well and the characters are mostly in character and not ooc, keep up the good work as for pairing Sora/Ruby would work perfectly since they both are goofy as hell and act similar

It's a good story and everything but I don't know KH Sora is pretty weak compared to KH2 Sora and I don't know but the whole SoraxRuby thing is a little been there done that but that's probably because I'm a SoraxKairi fan but if you can write it better than some others I read I can get into it but if you can make it a harem-esque situation that would be fun but the main thing is you should just use KH2 Sora no offense to the old KH Sora but KH2 is a lot stronger. It's not like the transition would be hard to do.

Seem interesting so far. And good to see you people other then Sora able to fight Heartless. Some stories I read they make it so only Sora can fight them.

Just no shipping. Been done too much.