I am so fucking confused already...
I hope you redo this whole thing, because it is a convoluted piece of work.
Gook luck

You sir are a retard or mam im not sure

I really like this different verson and hope to see more of it! It's intriguing!

Does anybody else relies how there are no other Permione story's seriously I scoured the site and there are like none how is that possible the make such a cute couple I've been considering changing my name to PermioneForever. ;)

YES! I Definitely think that you should continue this version, even though I adored the original one. I really like this so far and can't wait for another chapter (hopefully?).

I just want to say that I love your story and it is my favorite story also the original is definitely better in my opinion and last is that I've been thinking about this chapter and seeing as you seem to like cliffhangers I thought that it might be cool to add something to the end if you decided to rewrite the story here it goes
Grover - Annabeth I want to tell you something about Percy
Annabeth- what is it ( starting to feel slightly nervous)
Grover- it's you know the empathy link between me and Percy...
Annabeth- ( really starting to panic) just spit it out
(BTW I have no idea whether or not this next part is true)
Grover- now that he's far away I can only feel strong emotion and lately a emotion I've been feeling is love
Annabeth- ( now relieved ) well that doesn't really matter we all know Percy loves his mom
Grover- well yes but the love I'm feeling is romantic love
Annabeth- so
Grover- well now that Percy thinks you dumped him and doesn't think you love him any more now thinks that hes free to date anyone and since I'm feeling romantic love frequently and strong stronger than even when he dated you...
Annabeth- (now understanding) WHAT!
Hope you liked it please keep Percy and Hermione together who needs Percabeth when you have Permione

ThEy BoTh HaVe ThE sAmE nOsE
I laughed so hard at that sentence xD

I’m liking this revamp of the story! Super fun! I was thinking it would be cool if Percy and Harry did classes with Hermione together at some point. Especially after Percy is revealed as being the son of Tom Riddle. It would be rly cool to see the tensions rise until it explodes and at some point turns into mutual understanding between Percy and Harry.

Its me posiden the reader without the profile I don't know if you saw my which you you might not have because I might have accidentilly deleted but this time I'm on a computer so hopefully I'll have a account soon my username will still include posiden but will be posidentheboss567 any way I prefer the original. by from your biggest fan.

I remember reading this before I made my fanfic account and love how you decided to come back and begin rewriting chapters, they are great so far!

I just want say I am your biggest fan and your story is one of the first story I read and is by far my favorite. Unfortunately I don’t have a account so I can’t a user name as I din’ have a computer just a iPod. Honestly I prefer the original version and I think you shouldn’t change anything it’s perfect the way it is.

Are you sure the author is still alive been like five years I like the original better author if you’re still alive please update

Are we sure the author is still alive like it’s been 5 years I like the original better by the Author if your still alive please update I need to know what happens next

HI! Glad you're back
The story's great, but i think it could use some refining?
It seemed a bit rushed for me. so a couple more tweaks and details i guess.
but It's still great!

Hi-I just wanted to address your author’s note about OOC characters. You aren’t wrong. This is your story, and you can do as you please with the characters. Having said that, as a fellow author, and a reading-addict, I would like to advice you this: a story in which the character of the characters are written around the plot will never be able to compare to a story in which the plot’s events are written around the personalities of the characters. Similarly, a romance based on physical attraction, suave attitudes, and etiquette/manners, will never quite be as strong as one based around shared experiences, mutual interests, and good chemistry/dynamic.

Having said that-this is your story, and you can do as you like. So far, it’s interesting enough for me to continue reading it either way. But I figured that I could offer you some advice Incase you wanted to become better.